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JezSharp
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| Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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Good Chapter and DP, wasn't in danger of falling asleep.
Errrr...well going anywhere near the fight right now would be a bad plan, so head away from the battlefield and climb a tree for the night.
If we're alowed to expand into the depths of fantasy I'd suggest that within the woods there exist a peaceful tribe of small fairies who guide the travellers away to a place of sanctuary (or a place that appears to be a place of sanctuary if they are slightly less innocent and peaceful). |
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solus.serpen
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| Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 10:44 pm Post subject: |
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Mmhmm. Good chapter. I think they should stay back, maybe try and watch the fight to see who wins. If it's the elf that wanted them to come with him, I think that
1) they go with him because that way they could get food and supplies, although there is a potential risk. Those elves seemed to be helping them somewhat, though, so it wouldn't be too bad of an idea, hmm.
2) Jez's option. (btw, where did the fairies come from?! lol :) )
Joining the bards would be a madmans idea - they just tried to kill them! Hmm.
Anyway, really like how this story is progressing.
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~Solus |
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joyfull22
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| Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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ok, thanx guys!
i like solus's idea of getting the food
the fairies r a bit random, though not a bad idea!
does anyone else have any suggestions? |
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Chinaren
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This is a pretty good tale Joy! Caught up. What should they do now? Mmmm.
I think go back and see how the battle turns out, hiding of course. Then steal any euquipment and food left behind. I know, it's not a great idea, but it's all I have for now! :? |
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Christalnightshade
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:18 am Post subject: |
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Quote: “Shaun, we left our bags with the village.”
either it is "Shaun, we left our bags with the villagers"
Or it's "Shaun, we left our bags at the village"
Great chapter Joyfull. :D Become allies I say it would be cool to see what unfolds in that part of option. :D :D :D
Lets see they fight and then one wins-- a draw would be cool. still they could watch what is happening, but it would make them more funreable if they do not search for food and more weaponry.. |
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joyfull22
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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ok, well so far the main suggestions seem to be to stay and watch the fight and then to get their bags or more weapons or join the elf
or get rescued by some fairies
any more ideas? i'll try to get the poll up by wednesday or friday |
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joyfull22
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| Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 12:02 pm Post subject: |
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| I'll leave the poll up for about a week or so, depending on how many votes there are |
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joyfull22
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| Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 12:37 pm Post subject: |
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There seems to be a tie.
Could someone please break it?
Thanks. |
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algu95
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:37 am Post subject: |
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| THE TIE HAS BEEN BROKEN BY LILLITH! (or whatever) She said she would check in this SG, and she did. Well done! This SG is a too wonderful SG to be distrupted. |
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