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NeverNeverGirl
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
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Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:13 am Post subject: |
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hey Plates i just thought i would let you know i was here and still reading.
To me the pace for the explosion was just about right, the glib rhetoric between the two works and yes i sense a relationship of sorts coming - though i think she should be a very hard woman with a lust em and leave em attitude that doesnt come unstuck with his puppy dog eyes,
the DP has me agreeeing with zeph - it was a weird one as we are totally unfamiliar with the 'bad guys'
I await the next chapter - lets not leave it so long ok? |
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scissorkitty
Joined: 04 Mar 2008
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Location: Bottom of a teapot
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| Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 1:29 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm.. I think Mr.Nasty Badguy wants (once he's done eating) to gather himself a little gaggle of vampire girlfriends in an attempt to breed MORE vampire traits back into people- since you had mentioned them slowly fading away over time. Or, he's trying to strengthen his own vampire-ness by eating others. or something similarly disgusting.
Either way, he starts closing in on our little group. |
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Black Hawk
Joined: 23 Jun 2008
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Location: On board my ship/ At the Inn
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| Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:00 pm Post subject: |
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| maybe he gets a group of werewolves together and starts slaughtering vampires |
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