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Christalnightshade



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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:18 pm    Post subject: Laugh Out Loud- Prologue  

This was the long forgotten ifain world where creatures roamed on a small island on the US.

It was dark, gloomy, very murky and cold, there was water serounding her. The shouts coming from outside was strange it startled her; it was a man's voice, "Don't threaten me, you can't see her"

"Let me in Masterweaver!"

Opening her eyes she couldn't see a thing something was clasped around her mouth, seeing bubbles rising out a pipe.

A shock went through her body seeing a blurry image coming closer she tried to gain her composure.

There was something strange where she was; it was small and cramped, yet she could breath. Reaching out to the shadowy figure there was glass in the way.

"No sence in struggling in there..."

Immediately she knew she was in a tank, but why? Something must have happened to her. Why was she in a lab? She had so many questions.

The man outside shouted, "She is struggling!"

Another voice shouted pounding on something, "Let me in!"

She Broke the glass of the tank, the water spilled out onto the lab's floor. Hitting the glass one last time she fell out of the tank and the air pipe came loose. She got cuts and bruses from the fallen glass she was lying in.

She took small gaspes of air and Looked up. She grabbed a cloth in front of her, it looked like someone was holding it out to her, but there was no hand holding it.

Hiding her body with it she heard a voice, "You didn't have to do that, Crady"

She turned around, and couldn’t see the man. There was no one in the room.

Was that her name? It sounded like the mother didn’t know how to say a real name.

“Crady, can you let me go?!” the cloth she was holding onto was struggling, it wasn't a cloth it was a robe.

“Aaa!” She dropped the robe and ran to hide behind a cabinet

Thinking she was socked, Wait a second... this guy looked at me while I was in the tank. What a pervert! "Get away from me!"

"Relax, no one is going to kill you"

Half frightened she asked, "Who are you?"

The stranger threw clothing her way, "Uh… Just get dressed" He walked off exiting out a moving door.

Shouts raised outside the lab, "I want to see her!"

A sharp voice shouted, "Is she ok?"

"Why don't you help her?"

He answered, "I have nothing to help her with, she can figure out what happened on her own..."

She emerged from behind the cabinet and saw an old man staring at her. Her eyes grew wide, he was scary.



She quickly grabbed the clothing on the floor and dressed behind the cabinet. There seems to be an old lady behind him.

The old man said, "I'm D-lotus and the lady behind me is an idiot"

"hey I'm not, my name is Scheherazade"

"You have been in the tank for over fourty years"

"Why not take a shower. And I'll tell you later what happened to you"

Suddenly D-lotus began laughing...



Her clothes was baggy and she looked oversized.



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Chinaren



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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:55 pm    Post subject:  

Crady, you seem to have started an awful lot of stories/SGames recently, and they all seem to slowly fade away.

As someone who's been there and done that, I'd recommend you concentrate on only one or two and try and keep them going.

Just my 2cents. :D
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Christalnightshade



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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 11:06 pm    Post subject:  

I'd like to continue with this one and fantisi fiction. ^^ The rest may be deleted.
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D-Lotus



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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:40 pm    Post subject:  

That's a very nice picture of me. Where did you find it? I wasn't aware I was so popular on the Internet.

*Laughs for no apparent reason*
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Christalnightshade



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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:09 pm    Post subject:  

Sorry D-lotus I didn't mean it, didn't want you to think that I was a hater or anything. I just couldn't think of other names, D-lotus just popped into my head. This thread is going bye bye along with all the others. ^_6
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D-Lotus



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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:36 pm    Post subject:  

'Tis ok. I enjoyed your impression of me. :D
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