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Chemai Sterini
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| Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:31 am Post subject: Daughter of The Forest 2 |
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Continues on from; http://www.cityofif.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3919. thought I'd do this one as a SG :unsure:
And sorry for the unoriginal title lol
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Chapter One:
Staring at the crackling flames Soliea sighed angrily and flopped down on the ground. Frustration filled her and made her thoughts irrational; what was the point? She was never going to master it, perhaps she wasn’t meant to.
“Soliea! Don’t think like that, the forest needs you!” The now familiar voice never seemed to shock her anymore.
“But it seems like I will never be able to do this! How can I help when I can’t even master this basic healing?”
“Believe in yourself and the forest and all will be well.”
Soliea sighed, why did he have to be so dramatic all the time? All this believing in yourself was fine but she had been working on this for months and she hadn’t got anywhere! Deciding she wasn’t going to get any further in this state of mind she rose and made her way slowly back to the clearing where she spent most of her time. She gazed around with undiminished wonder at the beauty and serenity of the forest and slowly calmed; arriving at the edge of the clearing with her thoughts calm and collected and her mind at peace.
Before she had taken two steps into the clearing she heard a loud bang close by and off to the right and after collecting her thoughts she rushed headlong in the direction of the sound for once paying no heed to the sharp thorns cutting and tearing at her clothes and the braches wiping into her face. She stopped abruptly as she realised she had reached the origins of the sound and straightened up, gathering her thoughts and looking around her.
The first thing she noticed was a huge old oak tree lying on the ground and several other smaller ones also fallen and broken. Shocked and horrified by this sight she at first failed to notice the ragged boy sitting near the top of another tree watching her curiously and silently. The boy, seeing her staring at him, came out of his trance and let out a sudden exuberant yell and leaned forward; his weight breaking the already weakened trunk of the tree sending it crashing to the ground with a humungous crash just leaping away in time not to get dashed against the rocky ground.
Letting out a frightened yell Soliea took a step back then tried to send a bolt of magic at him but failed, sending her tumbling to the ground and knocking her unconscious.
“Hey! HEY! Wake up!” she grew conscious of fingers prodding her in the side then suddenly the whole thing came back to her.
“Get off me!” She yelled leaping up and shoving the boy aside but the sudden movement unbalanced her and she fell back to the ground earning another laugh from the boy.
“Calm down dear!” He joked easily avoiding her fists, “That is no way for a young lady to behave!”
Still glaring at him and smarting from embarrassment at her failed attempt to stop him she slowly pushed herself up into a sitting position and asked hotly, “Who are you and what are you doing here?”
Smiling, but surprised by the tone of her voice he stood and walked towards the middle of the clearing, “Having fun.”
Furious, she dragged herself to her feet and stalked off towards the clearing; in as close to a dignified manner as possible for someone who had recently been unconscious.
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So what does she do about the boy? I'm not sure about this as a DP so if you think I should write more first please say. |
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Christalnightshade
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| Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:19 pm Post subject: |
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he <<< Problem there. Good story Mai. Quote: Smiling but surprised by the tone of her voice a comma is needed between Smiling and but like this >>> Smiling, but surprised
As for a DP, let me think... I think she should be careful, the boy is calling her deary. Tough if he is a boy he might aswell be weak. So If there is going to start a fight she better know how to heal when needed. You can figure out who he is later and how old he is. How old is S ? |
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Chemai Sterini
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:05 am Post subject: |
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Errmm i'm not on my home comp so I don't have my notes but shes around 14. i have a bit of a plan for this because I was originally going to make it linear.
Edit: Any ideas for name would be most welcome haha |
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Christalnightshade
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| Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 10:43 pm Post subject: |
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| how about... Artis, Hugh or Kyle |
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Chemai Sterini
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| Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 5:35 am Post subject: |
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| I meant the name of the story not the boy. I have a bit of a plan so I already have a name for him. |
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Christalnightshade
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| Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 6:56 am Post subject: |
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| oh, sorry lol. I'm sorry I'm not good at coming up with names of books. Ask around, maybe you'll find someone who has a perfect name. I uasually only give original names. Like "Ignite", "Daydreaming" and "Bathos" |
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Chemai Sterini
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 3:15 am Post subject: |
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| Should I put a poll up including your idea and some of my own or just use yours? :? |
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:17 am Post subject: |
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| add your own ideas aswell, I'll like it anyway. |
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