City of IF

[lovebitesbitterly]

this my first time doing a story so be angry with me if you wish!!

Lovely angel of the dark...
gentle wind of the sea...
carry me...

A bright light seen stealing away into the pitch-black night. Suddenly, a cry rips throug. A man holds the Tora, the demon princess, in one of his hands. "She killed my daughter!" is heard over and over again. As the patrol comes, the queen is devestated.

The gaurdian watches her closly as the demon princess paces inside her cell. He already knows the verdict of her trail. It is ether death or exile. The bad thing was that he was her best friend since they were two and he has long loved her for her fiery nature. When she got angry and shook that long black hair of her's and her gray/silver eyes light up, then you know your in trouble. She often grew horns and a tail when she was angry and had control over the wild horse Alexander. See, she ruled nature and all things wild. The verdict of the trail may well kill her if it is exile. Thye will strip her of her powers and cast her to the human world. She will not be able to stand not being connected with all life. What should he do? Save her or not? His decision may well cost him his life.

[Advarr]

Woot!!! FIRST POST!!

I must say that your story and writing style is good, but the story is WAY too short... past that, the story won't be too exciting if the main character is dehabilitated in the beginning so he should save her.

X.x

Its ME.
Varr