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 Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:46 am Post subject: The Archer's Quest Chapter 15: Road to the Fourth Age |
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The final chapter of the featured storygame "The Archer's Quest" has been posted:
Chapter 15: Road to the Fourth Age
Thanks for everyone who contributed to the second Archer storygame. I had a lot of fun playing it, and I hope you did too. 
This storygame is complete, but the saga of the Wheel continues on...
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It was a fun tale, I enjoyed it immensely. I'm kind of saddened that it's over...
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I would have liked to see a little more description in the scene where Deica is reunited with Merope. It seems kinda dry for a such a 'miracle'.
Otherwise, this was a great ending! All the questions formulated at the beginning of the story have been answered, but the adventure continues. I don't think there could have been a better ending for this story; it resolves everthing without being outright conclusive. There is a sensation of forthcoming adventure and excitement tied with the satisfaction of having achieved our most immediate goals.
Congrats on finishing another great Wheel storygame!
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Thanks, everybody. It's been great writing another Wheel story, and I appreciate those of you who stuck with it, since this one went on awhile.
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