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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:42 am    Post subject: Run. Chapter 28 - The Battle at the End of the Universe. Reply with quote

A reworked Run is now available as an ebook. You can find it by clicking on the image below.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Took me just a touch to catchup but then that's cuz I've been terribly delinquent in my readings (sorry!) A mite bit disturbing to see how nobody else has posted a response on our Spotlight tale's last two chapters either. But... can't get on anyone else if I can't keep up I suppose.

And to make matters more frustrating overall, this is shaping up really well. The story is intricate at this point, yes, but it still makes a lot of sense somehow. Don's death was a bit surprising - went down a bit easier than I'd thought but then we don't have proof of DEATH just that he's been shot and no double tap so that could be played on again later.

The DP is tough. Damned tough. Is it possible to sacrifice some of both? Or must it absolutely be one OR the other?
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WB T! Sorry, didn't see your reply until today.

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Is it possible to sacrifice some of both? Or must it absolutely be one OR the other?


Well, to be honest, any suggestion welcome!

I didn't realize this was so far behind. I'll either poll or go ahead with a new chapter tomorrow.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 9:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well then, I suggest they find a way to sacrifice a little of both. Or would it be possible to sacrifice SOME of this world to stabilize the other?
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 3:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caught up!!

I really really like the story you have here. For the DP, I'd say that we'll have to sacrifice a bit of both universes and try to save both of them. Don't destroy one universe completely uness there is no other way.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now you catch up! Very Happy

I'm just about to post the final chapter. The suggestion was to trick the prof, made on Tome.

Oh well, hang two and you can see for yourself!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 10:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is extremely pleasant and average post...you shook posting it...thanks a ton for posting it...!!




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