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Kharnre’s reaction time was far greater then she expecte |
lordofthenight wrote: |
- does anyone else detest writing fight scenes? |
Lily wrote: |
Anyway, do you seriously mean this is the end, Lordy? A weak ending to say the least if it is. |
Zephyr wrote: |
If you DO end it here, another story which picks up where this one left off, following the path of the sword itself, would be my suggestion. There needs to be some meaningful story 'core' that reaches fruition somehow. |
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