Fats_Masterson wrote: |
Another Great Chapter Nene, and congrats on winning August's SGOTM (I was rooting for you the whole time). I love the constant literary and pop culture references. As for what is sticking out of the rubble, I say it's a small, poorly handmade, rabbit-skin handbag. |
NeNe wrote: |
...Anything exotic, unusual or frighteningly unnecessary is available for sale...A trumpet filled fanfare rose up from the shadows and left no doubt in the minds of anyone that here was a man with his own theme song...‘Er, did you say take over the world?’ Barry asked sheepishly. ‘Back before when I first came in?’...Desdemona Doomini could taste victory already and was surprised that it resembled nothing so much as the flavour of a good Chardonnay...In typical Evil one fashion she began her conversation by divulging all of the most important secrets and plot points of her grand plan.
...and many other things. |
Reiso wrote: | ||
Oh, I like her. This is excellent material. Seriously NeNe, this had me laughing hard several times, which is saying quite a bit in light of the week I have just been through. So thank you for the very needed laugh. The idea is classic but your voice is original. I love all the narration gags and the other self-aware bits as well, and besides, any story in which witches and Delorians exist side by side is a story worth reading, if you ask me. You may want to keep an occassional wayward eye to spelling (gipsie=gypsy), but that is such a minor thing, considering how infrequent it is. This is wonderful stuff, keep it up. |
Fats_Masterson wrote: |
Would it help if i said the bag was at one time a happy bowl of petunias? |
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