whythewindblows wrote: |
Not Bad. But I think in future you'll have to try harder on the details because the ideas are great, but great ideas without details is like an iced latte with the caramel. |
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the sword and shield that last forever |
whythewindblows wrote: |
Isn't it a little early to be thinking of the ending? I mean he has the three other tests to go through, reading the tome and finding the artifacts and then beating some wizard ass so he can reclaim his place in the world. Anyways, I say his next test should be the Vampire test and the last should be the Wizard test. And how is he going to save Mack and Mary? I'm out. |
Arion Spirtsword wrote: |
I think that I would balk at the idea that I would have to face a GOD not to mention that I might have to face all the gods. |
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