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but the each nexus slowly builds power until midnight |
Shillelagh wrote: |
It's a bit more verbose than I would have liked... but the exposition has to happen sometime. And I can't quite justify glossing over this decision point- it really will make a huge impact on the story, and it's not fair for me to make the decision for Isaac by myself. |
Tikanni Corazon wrote: |
But what will happen if he goes wandering off? I realise that it would be dangerous, but I would still be interested to know. Will his crystal still be restored, no matter where he is, or will he be allowed to go where he pleases? What would happen if he was to go to, say, Pandaemonium, instead of staying at The Grove? |
Shillelagh wrote: |
I quite agree with your judgement, D. But Tony needs to speak sometime. I could have put in more action, but it would require me to skip past this DP |
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If you let Isaac guide the conversation, asking questions based on his limited experiences of the previous Crep, rather than asking Tony to clarify his own exposition, it will then force Tony to explain this universe in terms that Isaac can relate to - that we, the readers can relate to. |
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