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See D, you're just too difficult to please... |
D-Lotus wrote: |
I guess the answer to everything is that I'm picky with what I read, I have realized that most of the stories here at IF, including mine, are all much the same.... |
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The same in what manner? That we are not professional writers? That we write stories intended for posting online, rather than fully developed novels? That we write stories aimed at reader participation? |
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If you intend to critique my work make sure you don't lose me in the process. |
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I am interested in your opinion, D |
PoopOnYoop wrote: |
nice story 1/2 mom |
BStheGreat wrote: |
No offense, but this story is getting kind of boring. Is there every going to be any killing? I guess a guy like me isn't really into fairies. Maybe if it were leprechauns fightingin a major battle against the fairies i would like it. |
BStheGreat wrote: |
Well....
This is partly the voters fault, but I think that the decision to think over which path to choose was a waste of time. Nothing really happened that couldn't have happened in the chapter before that. It is written well, but I am not being drawn [in] to read it. I personaly like to have at least a few killings a chapter to keep the blood craving readers interested. |
BStheGreat wrote: |
Well....
This is partly the voters fault, but I think that the decision to think over which path to choose was a waste of time... |
Smee wrote: | ||||
Sorry for the intrusion Fauna - I'll be posting about your story very soon as I'm enjoying it. |
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