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#281: Author: Tazgirl180992,

Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 8:25 am
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supprise 'em with the fireball and such! Laughing

The element of supprise is on their side!! Very Happy

#282: Author: Jack_D.Mented, Location: Hiding out in the woods of Washington

Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 8:57 am
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Cool chapter. I like the whole idea of disguising themselves as zombies, even though it does seem a bit Shaun of the Dead- like. Oh, well...

It's not gonna win anyways, so carry on with the mayhem!

#283: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 4:25 pm
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Me too actually. Oh well. I will write the next chapter as soon as I can think of something! Very Happy

In the meantime, poll is still open!

#284: Author: Shady Stoat, Location: England

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:00 am
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I think they have to go for the Eye. If they can't find that, then all of this journey has been for nothing. Locking themselves in with the mad monks will achieve nothing, neither will rescuing their friends in the infirmary. Unless Narg has two eyes against the Necromancer's one, they'll probably lose the fight.

Dashed good chapter, old chap Wink

#285: Author: Smee, Location: UK

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:05 am
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Very good chapter Chinaren, but *sobs* Poor Shorty Sad

The third eye must be retrieved before the necromancer. As to how - I'll have to think.

Happy Writing Smile

#286: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:09 am
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Very good chapter Chinaren, but *sobs* Poor Shorty

Aye well. Shogun no longer frequents the site, and I thought it about time for a major character loss*. It's a sad day indeed. Crying or Very sad

*There may be another one coming up somewhere else too.

#287: Author: Jack_D.Mented, Location: Hiding out in the woods of Washington

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 9:03 am
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Wow. I add characters to my story just as you start killing yours off.

Interesting contrast, don't you think?

But anyways, good work so far. I'm liking it.

#288: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 2:50 pm
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Feel free to replace him with me should you like.

And I agree with Shady, got for the eye and then try to get to the Sanctum. But does he know where anything is in the Abbey? Maybe grab hold of a monk as a guide as well.

#289: Author: OldJoe, Location: On mah steed.

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 4:05 pm
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I reckon yer should git to the Eye. Yup. Hat off to Shogun.

#290: Author: Dobs,

Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:20 pm
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go for theeye. its what you came for.

#291: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:35 pm
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Okay then, polls up. Go for it!

#292: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 6:40 pm
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Voted for the eye, and winning.

But can I just say - that looks mighty similar to my poll, what with the extra bit at the bottom - I'm just a trend-setter.

#293: Author: Dobs,

Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:30 pm
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voted my freind!

#294: Author: DukeReg, Location: Australia

Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:52 am
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This poll is going to be really close! Laughing

#295: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 4:30 am
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DukeReg wrote:

This poll is going to be really close! Laughing

LOL!

#296: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 2:26 pm
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“Defeat the what? Damn it, I hate it when that happens

Lol - speaking from experience is he? And two new chapters in one day - lots of free time hmm?

As to what to do - what is he a goodie goodie Paladin, or a hardened Warrior Heroy Person. Go straight for the Necromancer - if your friends can't handle themselves you should get some better friends.

#297: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 3:41 pm
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Lol - speaking from experience is he? And two new chapters in one day - lots of free time hmm?

I had this one half done, was just stuck at the shapeshifter bit.

#298: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 3:44 pm
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So...maybe you'll get Arena up soon too - won't that be nice?

#299: Author: Shady Stoat, Location: England

Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 10:53 pm
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Excellent chapter Cool

Now, on the grounds that defeating the Necromancer will defeat those that he has summoned, I think Narg is going to keep his eye on the main goal here.

Besides, he's nasty - and as Lordy says, his companions are mercenaries and volunteers. If they can't handle themselves, they should never have come along.

#300: Author: Key, Location: The Royal Palace

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 11:25 am
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F5 Shady and Lordy - you've got the Necromancer on the run, don't slack off.

#301: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 9:43 pm
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Right, it seems like a simple poll is needed this time. A clear cut choice...

#302: Author: DukeReg, Location: Australia

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 9:49 pm
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Voted to get the necromancer. My reasons are the same as those listed above.

#303: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 10:29 pm
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Voted as I declared originally for the necromancer, and winning.

#304: Author: CunningFox,

Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 5:02 pm
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i voted to help.

#305: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 5:02 pm
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You are a cruel lot! Hearltess.

Nice!

#306: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 8:59 pm
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The 'Get the Necromancer' vote took it, so I have started writing the next chapter.

#307: Author: Smee, Location: UK

Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 9:44 pm
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Ack - I forgot to comment and missed the vote Confused

Sorry Chinny.

#308: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 10:37 pm
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I forgive you. It was fairly one sided vote anyway!

I reckon this story only has 2 or 3 chapters left now so, without rushing it, I want to get it done.

#309: Author: Dobs,

Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:44 pm
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comeon then! Weres the next chapter?

#310: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:45 pm
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Hehe. Sorry, I have started it, but currently stuck half way. It should be up early this week. I don't really have time this weekend.

#311: Author: Shady Stoat, Location: England

Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 12:58 pm
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I say get some rest. There's something going on here and betrayal is going to be the order of the day - I'm sure of it! Very Happy

So don't let anyone know you're back until you've rested and got your act together. Then approach the council Cool

#312: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 2:08 pm
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Maybe you could get Gorgus to report back, while you and Mistral go and find lodgings.

She does seem awfully quick to take him back though, especially after he ditched her for Serime. You might think she'd feel snubbed, but I suppose not.

#313: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 4:11 pm
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There's something going on here and betrayal is going to be the order of the day - I'm sure of it!

You are so cynical Stoat. Surprised

One day you are going to be wrong. Of course, it may not be this day. Wink

#314: Author: DukeReg, Location: Australia

Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 5:09 pm
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They should rest. Narg can spend some of the time deciding what to do with these world-shakingly powerful artefacts he's now carrying around. And I think Narg knows something isn't right about this whole deal. As for strong beds and Mistral-oriented usage thereof, there is plenty of time for that later, when he's got a better idea what her motives are.

#315: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 5:34 am
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Okay then. Polls up with the suggestions and a few others so it looks like people are interested. Wink

Vote away, says I.

#316: Author: Dobs,

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 11:29 pm
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voted to go and rest haha with mistral!!!! Very Happy

#317: Author: Dobs,

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 11:29 pm
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voted to go and rest haha with mistral!!!! Very Happy

This muist be nearly finished now eh chinaren

#318: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 12:28 am
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Yes, I am writing the next chapter now, which will probably be the last one.

#319: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 6:54 am
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Well, there you have it. My first Storygame* finished.

Bit of a long last chapter, but I wanted to wrap it up.

It didn't have the number of readers I would have hoped for, but I hope those that did follow enjoyed it. I would thank you for all your support and suggestions on the way.

This story is about 67,000 words long, according to Word. I plan to go over the whole thing and re-write it a little bit, to make it more of a novel.

Thanks again to everyone for participating. Another Narg tale will be along at some point in the future. Shocked

*That is to say, the first Storygame I started. The first ep of Narg was my first ever post on IF, so I feel all nostalgic.

#320: Author: Shady Stoat, Location: England

Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 9:21 am
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Wooo! Clapping

Well done - lots of atmosphere in that not-so-little chapter! I knew it wasn't over - but I didn't know that it wasn't over 3 times before the end Wink

And another Narg on the way? Sounds good to me Very Happy

Congrats on finishing your first ever storygame!

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