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you're not in constant temptation from the lust aspect |
Shady Stoat wrote: |
Yeah, I like the new chapter.
How about trying to cut a deal with the dragon instead of the gorgeous temptress? Set them against each other by telling him that you were sent to kill him, and by whom. Tell him also that now that you have seen his might, you know that you should be serving him, and that she should die like the treacherous piece of bile she is. Flatter him, grovel if you must, anything to show where your new loyalties lie. I know it may not seem like much of an improvement... but if it works, you could end up with a dragon for a boss instead of the Lady. At least with the dragon, you're not in constant temptation from the lust aspect. I think the Lady has a much bigger hold over you. |
chinaren wrote: |
Gah! He could have at least waited until after the act before he prodded her with his other weapon. Foolish, foolish mortal.
Tut tut. Some people, just can't follow something through. Up to then though, absoloutely excellent chapter JDM! |
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