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What should happen?

Michael pushes Joseph away and kills him?

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Joseph convinces Michael that the thug is no more unnatural then a bunny?

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The thug escapes and reports back to his "master?

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Total Votes : 4

Who Voted: Chinaren, Lilith, LordoftheNight

#41: Author: Guest,

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:26 am
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WEEEE!!!! good chapter there fenris I fo hope to see more. I say that he had enough of being beaten. Wink

#42: Author: Guest,

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:03 pm
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chinaren wrote:

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If you have, seek some new friends,

Ha! Great line!

Great chapter infact Fenris! Liked it a lot. Very Happy

A few areas could do with a little touching up, but generally very good.

I was reading it over and grimaced a lot. lol. Thanks nightshade and Lilith. Well...the DP is whatever you want it to be, but mainly how the hell is Michael supposed to get out of this situation?

#43: Author: joyfull22,

Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:30 pm
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Great chapter Fenris!
For the DP, I suggest that Michael should keep on telling the truth and use his torn off arm as evidence. If that fails, he should probably just bear all the pain. The interrigators wouldn't kill him, would they?

#44: Author: Guest,

Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:11 pm
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The demon reattached his arm, remember?

Just keep with it until they knock him unconscious, hopefully they won't kill him.

Try another story.

Hard DP here Very Happy

#45: Author: Guest,

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:31 pm
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I'm back! And unfortunately, no one has responded from the time I've been gone. Any ideas people?

#46: Author: Crunchyfrog,

Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:17 am
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His arm may have been reattached, but there is nothing in the chapter to say whether it has any use yet. That could still be evidence.

Maybe a clue could be in the way it has been reattached...

I can't think of anything more at the moment... Confused

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