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I tried to make this chapter more open instead of what Hal decides to do |
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What do you think of my new avatar? |
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lol. I didn't have one before, |
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fualt |
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coulden't |
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indded |
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happend |
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revverie |
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forbiden
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And so what happened today, when you were fighting uncle donovan, will happen agian?"
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Very good plot development Geek Girl. I like it!
I think he should demand to see his mother before he goes anywhere. Not for her to see him, but just to find her and take a glimpse and make sure she's still alive, at least. Otherwise, her peril will be a constant distraction from what he has to do next. |
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