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#1: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 4:44 am
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It is difficult to conjure what Ouran might see in his restless vision, as I still know little about the culture. I believe however he might see a past vision of a dark, exotic stranger that brings healing to a past Sojourner, and a great reconciliation of some sort.

#2: Author: Alegria, Location: On the beaches with Dr. Suess' Sneeches. Only the star-bellied ones, of course.

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 5:59 am
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Thnx 4 the Idea, I was thinking he might see stuff that explained his culture to the rest of us (including me).

#3: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 6:41 am
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That would certainly be helpful, maybe revisiting scenes where he learned from a wise tutor to encompass a longer history- or simply a few short memories from his life that shape the present culture.

#4: Author: Alegria, Location: On the beaches with Dr. Suess' Sneeches. Only the star-bellied ones, of course.

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 7:44 am
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Hey, do you guys think I have any chance at nomination or, dare I say it, winning the story game of the month award?

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#5: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:51 am
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You've just started. Keep developing your story and if not this month, then next month I'm sure you will have a good shot at SGOTM.

#6: Author: Muaddib,

Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:44 pm
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I could nominate you, but I myself have been nominated 3 times and not won even once.Though I came close on the 2nd one.

#7: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 3:22 am
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I imagine if the Dark Lord were nominated, you'd win it- or at least come frustratingly close like you did last time. I might have to break down and catch up with what's going on in that story. I follow the Mysteries but just never got into the Dark Lord for some reason.

#8: Author: Alegria, Location: On the beaches with Dr. Suess' Sneeches. Only the star-bellied ones, of course.

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:05 am
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Well, if you could nominate me, that would be great!

#9: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:42 am
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Alegria wrote:

Well, if you could nominate me, that would be great!

I shall consider it. :mrgreen:

#10: Author: Muaddib,

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:51 am
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I suggest you wait this month, get a good reader base, otherwise ill nominate if you persist.

#11: Author: Alegria, Location: On the beaches with Dr. Suess' Sneeches. Only the star-bellied ones, of course.

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 10:55 am
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Ok, I'll try to get more readers

#12: Author: Muaddib,

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 5:19 pm
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Well actually theres little u can do. Just change ur signature and hope for the best, ill try and put a word in where i can

#13: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 2:35 am
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Alegria wrote:

Well, if you could nominate me, that would be great!

Alas, I opted to nominate another storygame whose author has been working on it longer. Don't despair, your game is still good, and I encourage you to keep working on it. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing. Smile

#14: Author: Alegria, Location: On the beaches with Dr. Suess' Sneeches. Only the star-bellied ones, of course.

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 12:35 pm
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I'm going ahead with the poll, but since I goofed up on the first (made it never-ending,) it will be in the miscellania section of the others forum

#15: Author: ethereal_fauna, Location: USA

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 2:23 pm
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To change your poll, you will first have to send a PM to the moderator of the forum (Smee) and ask him to delete the current poll. Once he has deleted the current poll, you can Edit your first post to create the new poll. You will need to do this everytime you change polls, regardless whether the poll is never-ending or not.

Smee is gone for about a week, so be patient after you PM him, and he will eliminate your old poll after he gets back.

#16: Author: Alegria, Location: On the beaches with Dr. Suess' Sneeches. Only the star-bellied ones, of course.

Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 12:46 pm
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Thanks for the info

#17: Author: Smee, Location: UK

Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:45 am
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Hey Alegria,

Good to see you have hooked a couple of other readers. Smile

Know that I am one of them too, although as you may have spotted, my time has been very limited recently and I couldn't make a comment.

I have deleted the poll, so you should be able to add a new one for Chapter 3 when you write it - don't worry about the chapter 2 poll, that'll be ok for this time.

As for the dreams - as Fauna said, it's hard for us to know the sort of things he might dream, so I agree with the idea about dreaming some of the history - it'll help us understand more about your world.

Look forward to the next chapter,

Happy Writing, Very Happy

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