Ravenwing wrote: |
...the middle chapters were weak. |
Ravenwing wrote: |
Also I do have another story in mind. A mystery to be exact, but I still don't have time to write it, even though I finished this tale. |
Suneila wrote: | ||
Wow. Well done, Rave.
I wouldn't say they were weak, exactly, but the first chapters, and especially this last one, were a lot stronger. ~sunny |
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