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Gallant wrote: |
Oh and I don't mean to be pushy but make the next chapter longer. I want something chunky to digest. |
Crunchyfrog wrote: |
I like this story although I found the switch of POV a little confusing. The character that was in 2nd person - I guess we're assuming this is who is sobbing, or perhaps Snow White?
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DeadManWalking wrote: |
But i think you could turn green light into something a lot more horrible than any growling beast |
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table set for what seemed like a huge party |
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Once armed with something sharp I would be much more inclined to head into the thorn-door. |
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