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And yet I'm struggling to decide if I like it. I felt a little bombarded by names, and my unfamiliarity with South America isn't helping the many, many details embed properly.
What is hermanita? The President says it repeatedly but the sister didn't comment on it, even internally, as being odd, whereas it seemed very strange to me. I found the use of the brackets for the extra info, twice so close together -- (me), (Cano-Patín) -- a little distracting too. |
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As the pale yolk of dawn gradually subdued the bedraggled night Fate pins our family down as we thrash against our curse of madness. |
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A sprightly woman |
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I invited Alejandro to have lunch with us, to which he enthusiastically agreed. |
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And who had given the orders to make such a delicate arrest without informing my brother? |
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