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Shady Stoat Elder
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Good tale Lordy
Interesting take on the 'descent into madness' as well. I like it!
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Solomon Birch Honored Citizen
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:10 am Post subject: |
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Woo , killing! Good entry Lordy. _________________ "Humankind cannot stand too much reality" - T.S. Elliot
Thesopholis - A Noir Sci-Fi Story - Chapter 8 is up! Read it here
The End of the Voyage - Chapter 9
Shady the Furry Goblin! [Demon's, Satan and Slobadan Milosevic!] - Chapter 3
The Quest for the Legendary Rubber-Duckie! - Chapter 3
One Last Bullet.... Chapter 3
Green Eyes - Chapter 5
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ethereal_fauna Perpetually Distracted
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:22 am Post subject: |
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OOooh, another to nit-pick . Good entry,
Lordy wrote: | The Holy Grail. Le Saint Graal. Il Santo Grail. Der Heilige Gral. Known through-out the civilised world this sacred artefact has been the talk of men for centuries.
Entry the First
Today I set off for Castle Corenic, near the town of Llangollen. The Grail Castle is now deserted, but I believe I may discover the whereabouts of the Grail by searching through the empty corridors and hidden passages ways all castles are warrant to hold. I shall leave my servants and esquires in Alnwick Castle, to prepare to sent word of my success when I return.
Entry the Third
We should arrive within two days, any other misfortune forewidth.
Entry the Four
Entry the Fifth
Today a horrible sight met our eyes. We came abreast of a hill, and saw before us the bodies of three peasants crucified upside down before us. (omit, redundant)
Entry the Tenth
He had been eviscerated by a being of incredible force, his chest bared open. And…his heart…removed. In panic I fled from the room in panic (omit, redundant), David close on my heels.
Entry the Eleventh
This is the first chance I’ve had to write done my thoughts, and it is fitting that it is under an image of God.
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Kalanna Rai Assassin for Hire
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Hoofprints is the correct spelling fauna, checked it out in an online dictonary...all the others were good catches though and I've fixed em'... _________________ "It's not just about living forever...the trick is living with yourself forever..."
"Music makes you braver."
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sparta12 Honored Citizen
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Has anyone seen Sax lately? _________________ May have accidentally come up with a new Sci-Fi Storygame.
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ethereal_fauna Perpetually Distracted
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:31 am Post subject: |
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sparta12 wrote: | Has anyone seen Sax lately? |
Nope, not recently. Probably a bad case of the RLs has gotten him down. _________________ The maker of a sentence launches out into the infinite and builds a road into Chaos and old Night, and is followed by those who hear him with something of wild, creative delight. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Poll time is here! Everybody ready? _________________ Eadgar's Saga Chapter 2 POLL
Abattoir Chapter 2!
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Sounds kinda kinky to me _________________ The maker of a sentence launches out into the infinite and builds a road into Chaos and old Night, and is followed by those who hear him with something of wild, creative delight. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Gee that's what you get for making her your pet Omega... _________________ "It's not just about living forever...the trick is living with yourself forever..."
"Music makes you braver."
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One more day of polling...so people need to get their votes in quick. _________________ The maker of a sentence launches out into the infinite and builds a road into Chaos and old Night, and is followed by those who hear him with something of wild, creative delight. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
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I don't think it will swing so much at the last minute. But then again, I have been wrong* before.
*Once, back in '87. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
My Amazon page.
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Looks like we have a winner!
Congrats to Fauna and her stellar story, "The Unfortunate Defenestration of Jacob's Crystallized Faith." _________________ Eadgar's Saga Chapter 2 POLL
Abattoir Chapter 2!
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:26 am Post subject: |
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Well done _________________ The path of my life is strewn with cowpats from the Devil's own Satanic Herd!
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:50 am Post subject: |
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Congratulations Fauna, great story! :biggrin: _________________ "Humankind cannot stand too much reality" - T.S. Elliot
Thesopholis - A Noir Sci-Fi Story - Chapter 8 is up! Read it here
The End of the Voyage - Chapter 9
Shady the Furry Goblin! [Demon's, Satan and Slobadan Milosevic!] - Chapter 3
The Quest for the Legendary Rubber-Duckie! - Chapter 3
One Last Bullet.... Chapter 3
Green Eyes - Chapter 5
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 1:14 pm Post subject: |
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Well done Fawna
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Thanks everyone
I'll get a new comp in the works in the next day or two. _________________ The maker of a sentence launches out into the infinite and builds a road into Chaos and old Night, and is followed by those who hear him with something of wild, creative delight. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
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