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I had similar thoughts on the matter but then realized... they shouldn't really be making a pest of themselves at the moment with such a less than hearty welcome. Go get some food perhaps.
I love the imagery in this chapter as I have throughout this tale. This DP, however, lacks a clear objective... nothing really to overcome so to speak. Perhaps you meant there to be but I didn't get it perhaps. That said, not all DPs can be great ones and the easy read was nice. Hoping to see this pick up further as I see a lot of fun lying in store here!
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Loved the characters. Creepy but funny at the same time.
Uh, well, they'd come to play, but they've promised to be quiet. And the doorman alluded to there being food for them. Go find some food, or perhaps ask one of the servants where they can get some.
Good to see this SG back up and running again! 
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Thanks for the compliments, Thunderbird. And I know, it's a broad dp, but I do really want this bit to be open the readers.
And it's good to be back, Crunchy. 
Alright, so at the moment we've got:
Make a loud noise
Follow the servant girl
Get some food
Any more?
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Poll is up, eerebodah.
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Bump.
Don't miss this one, folks!
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This will be the last bump, I promise.
(I'm back, and I'd like to keep continue this story. So read it and vote, everyone!)
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Poll is closed!
What should our good friends Hansel and Gretel do?
Make a loud noise [ 0 ]
Follow the servant girl (currently being dragged away) [ 1 ]
Go find some food [ 2 ]
And the new chapter will be up within the next week.
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I read this one a while ago, and wanted more! So I'm gald to see it continueing Phan-fan! You can do it!
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| Who Voted: Crunchyfrog, DeadManWalking, Thunderbird |
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