chinaren wrote: |
Now, are you working on the next chapter yet? |
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deus ex machina
n. 1) an unexpected power or event saving a seemingly hopeless situation, esp. in a play or novel. 2) a handy plot device. |
Thracia Alba wrote: |
Gemma glanced up. "What was what?"
"It sounded like a frog being smacked violently against a stone wall." |
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Cleo tut-tutted in sympathy. "Poor thing, you're stuck on this quest then, aren't you?"
Cleo nodded. "Until it's finished, or until he gives it up of his own accord. Which he will in the morning. Trust me on that." She pounded her right fist against her left hand, and once more Cleo almost felt sorry for this Coriander. |
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It was now or never. Coriander fingered the stone apprehensively, then coughed. The elf turned to look at him.
"Eat rock you pale skinned ninny! Nyaaahhh!" |
Shady Stoat wrote: |
...He hasn't really got the brain-power to think up anything cleverer than 'hit it with a rock'. |
Ravenwing wrote: |
You know, when you have so much time, when you decide to post up a song that is related to your story. |
lordofthenight wrote: |
Ah, I was wondering which hole you'd been hiding in Rave. |
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She could see trees, and off a little ways there was Coriander, still snoozing away in his cage. Oh great, so she was in Hell! |
Dobs wrote: |
grat new chapter thracia! a bit long for me but i got through it! |
Thracia Alba wrote: |
Argh. And I had everything all figured out for option 2, which was winning until recently. Ah well, time to get a-plottin'. *plots* |
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