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Being an only child, who's Mother had passed away years earlier, Tim slowly realized that he would soon be the recipient of his father's dynasty. |
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"Timothy," the voice said tauntingly, like a man giving candy to a child, "Timothy, your missing out on a golden opportunity!" |
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"Would it hurt? Is it... painful? If you have my soul, do I actually get to experience the life your offering me?" |
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Quivering in terror, the Beast pled for his forgiveness,[...] |
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Her panicking vibrations shook the cavern in return, stones cracking beneath her clawed feet. |
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He began to writhe with anger at the world's insistent refusal to allow him to live up to his mighty emperor of a father figure. |
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Quivering in terror, the Beast pled for his forgiveness, "I a-a-apologize, Great One, Morning Star, Most Beautiful Lord of Darkness and Light! |
Ravagerrr wrote: |
Sure... but when you get up over 20 chapters or so, there's no way you'd want to go through em all just to get to the latest decision point! After 50, after 100 etc...? |
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I don't think any of the finished storygames have gone over 15 chapters. Even Key's stories end around there. Though I have a feeling Sax's Monster in the Shadows may reach 20 plus chapters if he ever finishes it. |
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Breakfast, for Mack, was a hearty meal of ten omelets, five cheeseburgers, a loaf of bread, lightly toasted and smothered with butter, and a side of 40 ounces of steak |
Viridian wrote: |
What's a dungeonous surface? |
Viridian wrote: |
What has the Morningstar been doing to Brendra? (Did I miss something from previous chapters? ) |
Rave wrote: |
Very nice chapter, though a bit longish, but I got through it. LOL. |
Stoat wrote: |
I didn't expec the dragon to be working for someone higher up, certainly. We'll have to watch out for this Darklord - although I shouldn't think we'll have to watch hard
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Rave wrote: |
I liked the wyrm's different names for her master. |
Lordy wrote: |
The names do make it sound similar to Lucifer, or Satan, or the Devil - whatever who wish to call him. Do you think it could be? |
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I'll try to keep em shorter... sorry. |
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