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#1: Rise of Shadows chapter 4 - Bridge. Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 4:13 am
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Chapter 4 - Bridge.

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Last edited by Chinaren on Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:09 am; edited 4 times in total

#2: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 5:39 am
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I think heading for the engine room is the best idea - they have no way of knowing the approaching ship's intentions, and they could be hostile. The fact that this ship is just appearing as soon as their engines go down, and they're supposed to be in remote space seems suspicious to me.

Not to mention the fact that they wouldn't want to pass on the infection to anyone else - meeting with the approaching ship could do just that, if they happen to be on the same side.

#3: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:02 pm
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Okay then, I had to pull the chapter I first posted 'cos it was a mess. I've fixed it up some now, so it's back up!

Enjoy! Very Happy

#4: Author: LordoftheNight, Location: Hell

Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:15 pm
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Well, same thing as I said before I think. I see no reason to change my mind.

#5: Author: D-Lotus, Location: Hollywood, USA

Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 6:47 am
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Quote:

“Shit, glad to here it sir!”

Tiny mistake... also:

Quote:

“ETA?”

I know you probably had no clue, but these are the initials of a terrorist group in Spain. Whatever...

Anyway...this is a difficult situation. I guess, firstly, send a message to the ship warning of the infection. Find out their intentions before venturing off into some wild situation.

#6: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:29 pm
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Thanks D. Yes, I have heard of the ETA, but this is more commonly used for: Estimated Time of Arrival

I corrected the 'here' mistake in my master, but must have missed it on this one.

Any other suggestions?

#7: Author: Player of Fates, Location: Darkness

Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 9:40 pm
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I can think of none, mostly because I agree with lordofthenight's plan.

#8: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 10:31 pm
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Any other suggestions? Lordy has it all to himself at the moment! Surprised

#9: Author: DELETED,

Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:14 pm
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#10: Author: CunningFox,

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:32 pm
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Split up. Send the marines down to the engine room and the captain stays and arms weapons ready for the other ship.

#11: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:44 pm
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Forgot about this one!

Well, there only seems to be two suggestions, though the order of the actions differ perhaps.

I've put up a poll, so fire the thruster of voting.

#12: Author: OldJoe, Location: On mah steed.

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 8:00 pm
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Ahm thinkin’ yer need ter find out who’s on this new ship right quick like. Yer don't need no pesky critters firing on yer whilst yer a sittin' duck no sir.

#13: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:20 pm
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K, this one is next on my list, in the 5 minute intervals that RL currently allows me to write in.

So if you have any last minute voting to do, get to it!

#14: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 1:38 am
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Okay then. I'm closing the voting and starting the next chapter.

If you like this story, please vote for it in SGotM! Very Happy

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