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Well, nicely written again D. I'm not quite sure about just giving people names straight off like that though, it seems a bit rude:
"What's your name?" "I'm Tom." "You look like a Jack." "Well you look like a dick, want to make something of it?" Anyhoo, I f5 Messy, lets take things slowly and see what's what. The farmhouse, damn straight. BTW: This tale reminded me of a kids story in a way, everything seemed very simple and straightforward. I'm guessing you intended it that way though. |
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Robbie has a charming, quirky, bold personality - and he's fairly naive |
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I think a flying donkey ought to show up for real - let's give Robbie's imagination some practical applications |
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Iím not sure if you meant it, but Jack sorta sounds a little mentally retardedÖ unsure if this was your intent, I was left in a gap there trying to figure out how his voice must have sounded |
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