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Avarice chapter 18 - Hollow.

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It's foggy, we're in a petrified forest, there's some unholy spirit nearby, and we're wearing sunglasses.

Try and send the Hollow in. (rather risky!!)

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Create a distraction and then go postal on their asses.

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Up a tree, distraction, ambush.

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Try using his new powers somehow.

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Total Votes : 6

Who Voted: algu95, Chinaren, Crowkiller, Crunchyfrog, Cyberworm

#1: Avarice chapter 18 - Hollow. Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 6:05 pm
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#2: Author: Cyberworm, Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown.

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:00 am
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First post! Laughing

The grammar is very good, I haven't noted anything too big, and he spelling is also good. You've managed to say so much in so few words. Kudos. Smile

Maybe there is a hidden tunnel he used when he was hunter himself? Every good leader has an escape route, and if I recall correctly, Smur was the Big Guy in his tribe.

#3: Author: Mephistopheles, Location: Not where I want to be.

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 4:03 am
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another good chappy china. Summoned an evil beast huh? doesn't the summoner usually have some control of such? if so, why not use it as a hunting dog, sending it out to destroy those that disturb smur's mind? And then, of course, unsummon it so he can get away with those he wants.

Otherwise, the only thing i can think of is to create a distraction and burst in, killing all who stand in his way.

#4: Author: Crunchyfrog,

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 10:32 am
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I don't think Smur has much control over the Hollow - he barely knew how to summon it. He didn't even know what he was summoning - powers of necromancy obviously need special training. If I were Smur, I wouldn't go trying that again!

It doesn't mention which direction the distant shriek came from, but my guess is it was not from where he thinks Alice is. If he can hear people talking they must be close up.

I'd say climb one of the stone trees, and throw a small rock or something in the direction of the talking and see what happens. If there is another guard he'll come running. The fog is thick, so if Smur is up high enough, he won't be seen from the ground.

#5: Author: The Meaning Of Fear, Location: In a deep, dark corner of the universe, plotting.

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:30 pm
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Nice one, Monkey (Ex)Mayor Man! Razz

A bit short though.

I F5 Crunchy.

#6: Author: CunningFox,

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:45 am
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It was shorter than your usual ones China. Still good though.

I lost this from my favourites, so missed the new chapters. Can we stop the favourites from dropping off somehow?

Well, Im caught up now.

I think calling the Hollow is too dangerous. Would he know some kind of code? Something the tribe might know so he could pretend to call for help? It's not a very good idea I know, but I can't think of anything. I'll come back to you on this one.

Oh wait! THought of something. Maybe he can use hisnew powers on the guards? or perhaps contact Alice by telepathy???

#7: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 9:57 pm
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Any more? I'll put up a poll later today or tomorrow.

#8: Author: algu95, Location: Trudging around in Allwhere

Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:04 am
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No, no new suggestions, currently...

Great chappy though, but short. Me wantz more! ... Surprised

#9: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:56 pm
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So be it. Poll is now up. Deficate into the pot of voting.

I've decided to try and concentrate on Avarice (and Tired) a bit more and attempt to get them done. I've about 10 other stories waiting in the wings and jostling for attention, so hopefully this one will speed up a little.

Don't forget to add it to your favorites if you like it! Very Happy

#10: Author: DELETED,

Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:09 am
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#11: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 5:44 am
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Anyone wish to break the tie here?

#12: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:27 pm
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Mmm. A three way tie. Confused

~thinks~

Okay, maybe I can actually merger these to some degree.

Poll is closed then, I'm going to start this one today. At long last.

#13: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 3:47 am
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New chapter will be up soon (unless omething interrupts me) so locking this one down.

Thanks for playing!!

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