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The Dark chapter 14 - Splatter. Part one.

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#1: The Dark chapter 14 - Splatter. Part one. Author: The Dark, Location: Tome.

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:51 am
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To read this you need to be some kind of sicko that gets off on suffering, vulgar porn and all the rest. You know it, The Dark knows it, let’s not pretend any more. Just read it, get it over with, then relax in your newfound freedom from moral obligation.
This has been A Dark warning. Thank you for your attention.

Chapter 14. Splatter. Part one.

Last edited by The Dark on Wed Jun 04, 2008 6:09 am; edited 1 time in total

#2: Author: D-Lotus, Location: Hollywood, USA

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:08 pm
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Shocking! It was Prime's place! (Pun intended).

I detected this mistake:

Quote:

Stepping over the child’s body, he peering around the corner of a crumbling building.

As for the rest, very intriguing and awesome. Now I'll go get my popcorn and wait for the second half.

#3: Author: Chinaren, Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:25 am
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Ooh, exciting chapter there Dark.

~Stuffs popcorn into his face whilst waiting~

#4: Author: Smee, Location: UK

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 12:17 am
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*Steals some of Chinny's popcorn, slurps on Slushpuppy and chomps on peanut M'n'M's.*

Half the amusement comes simply from reading your warnings. Keep it coming, Darky.

Laughing

#5: Author: The Dark, Location: Tome.

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:34 am
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Part 2 of this chapter, complete with decision point, shall be posted in a new thread momentarily.

#6: Author: The Meaning Of Fear, Location: In a deep, dark corner of the universe, plotting.

Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:19 pm
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Quote:

“This is fun, I should come down her

Here...

Otherwise, the writing is grammatically and spelling-ly perfect.

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