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Thunderbird wrote: |
comedy? Are you serious? I was thinking this would make a great horror tale! (That's the overwhelming vibe I get from this so far and would love to see it continue in that vein.) |
PopeAlessandrosXVIII wrote: |
Some work on sentance structure would benifit you greatly |
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My longing has yet to secede, and if I am to do what must be done than what is such a small trifle on my conscious. Indeed it would please me so, it has been far too long since satisfaction. Yes, I think I will. |
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