D-Lotus wrote: |
For one thing, it says in the diary that Henry is 21; and yet Charles is an 'old friend'. It seems rather unlikely that Henry and Charles even spent that much time together, considering Henry's youth. |
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Charles is described as an 'old' friend but only during the will-reading scene, which happens in 2010. It sounds as if the will was written shortly before Henry's death approximately 14 years later, in which case, 'old friend' would be fitting. |
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"So what did you teach Uncle Henry?" Emily broke into his thoughts. |
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As she reached for the half open door, it slammed shut of its own accord. She hesitated, then grabbed the handle and pulled. It opened half way, jerked out of her hand and slammed again. She spun, half in terror to Charles, and in that instant the room was perfectly dark. |
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"Oh. I see," she stood as she spoke, "You're a nutter. Excuse me, I need to go call the lawyer." |
Strausseman wrote: |
Thank you for your comments, this is the kind of feedback that I like getting. |
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Another field, this one simply rotated around the farmhouse that he had seen earlier. |
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