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I think you understate you ability Madam Witch |
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“Hm. Well, master wizards are not usually so free with their belongings, I wouldn’t want to activate some booby trap and be sent straight to the lower slopes of some level of Hell.” He looks at you. “That is why I have an assistant. His office is up the hall, first right. Large doors. You can’t miss them. Off you go.” |
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Josh nods. “Yes, the Major is very particular about us not sharing rooms until we are married.” |
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U need a synopsis at the beginning of the first thread.
The first part of the synopsis briefly explains the plot and the mystery to be solved. |
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The second part should detail the characters. Get some pics for them and post 'em with a quick bio and description of when they were introduced. They are the 'suspect list'. |
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Third, we should be able to see a map of the 'known' parts of the mansion, if possible, with all events so far shown on the map. This visual aid will bring us into the story and give us an idea of where our curiosities might wish to take us for investigations. |
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As I suggested to Rave for her mystery 'Glassbreaker', u should wrap up each chapter with a synopsis of the clues that have been given. Also a good idea would be to maintain all of the 'clues' as a whole for the last section of the Synopsis. |
chinaren wrote: |
Let me know if you see any anomolies, it is quite hard keeping track of everything! |
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This line threw me off as I was reading the chapter. It's Simon that was to marry Sam, right? So why would Josh be saying that line? |
Lordy wrote: |
But is there some form of mana here - as in would there be any point using magic where mana could do? |
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