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Liana
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| Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 12:58 pm Post subject: Curse of the Gifted |
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Lilith
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| It's nice to finally see this somewhere others besides myself can see your brilliant imagination, dear saati. I am glad you decided to join IF and become a part of the madness ... I mean fun! I hope you have as good a time as I am! |
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Liana
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| Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:21 pm Post subject: Chapter 2 |
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Liana
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| Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:36 pm Post subject: Chapter 3 |
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Liana
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| Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:32 am Post subject: Chapter 4 |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 4:04 am Post subject: |
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Liana aren't you going to ask for a poll. :shock:
I'll read your story real soon. :D |
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Liana
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| Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:45 am Post subject: |
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| no this is just a linear story. I already have it written. |
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Liana
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Lilith
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| I never did like Ross... and no one touches my saati...but I see that Selene can handle herself.. nicely done.. Keep it coming! |
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Liana
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Liana
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Liana
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Novelest_Ninjagirl
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:50 pm Post subject: |
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| Thank you so much! this is an awesome thing |
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Crowkiller
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:27 am Post subject: |
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| Great stuff keep it coming!! |
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Liana
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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| can you believe i wrote this as a freshman? |
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Aponi
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I love this type of story - there's a powerful archetypal theme running through it. The meaning of humanity, the relationship to the animal world, good and evil and love and war... good stuff.
As a writer, though, I'm dying to workshop it. Any plans to send it through a few more drafts to polish it up? |
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Liana
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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| This is actually the second draft. I've been rewriting each chapter as I go. I plan to get this publisehed some day. Bu before that can happen I have miles to go. |
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Crowkiller
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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| You wrote this freshman year? Wow I now know I fail at life. thats amazing great work I cant wait to read more! |
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Novelest_Ninjagirl
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| I must admit, what I sai before about this being awesome. . .doesn't even cover it. You can feel the emotions tingleing in the room along with you when you read, and can just see the characters before your very own eyes. I was pressed as close to the screen as I could be, nad didn't want to leave for enough time to eat, sleep, or drink. If this is the extent of your work from freshman year, I can't wait to see the rest. Keep up the good work and great writing! |
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Liana
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:01 pm Post subject: |
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| Noni, i wrote the entire thing. It's just in a notebook at present. Each chapter i put up is first read and revised from my original hand written copy. |
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