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Chinaren



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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 2:54 am    Post subject: Avarice. Chapter 6 - The Tower Revisited .  

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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:57 am    Post subject:  

Quote: “There are strange things here.” The shaman finished his work on the Bis’p and stood up. Rubbing is bent back, the old man continued. “I sense greater activity on the other planes that is usual. There is also something… lager.”

Bit of an alcoholic is he?

I think Smur should go look for Draggon. If nothing else, he can tell them there's another tribe trying to kill them, which should ingrate himself in her good books.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:13 pm    Post subject:  

There's always one isn't there? Thanks Lordy, corrected. Now, any other suggestions? :?
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 6:32 pm    Post subject:  

You have me hooked since Chapter 1. LOL. Very nicely done, China. The whole description of Smur and the city itself is just so real-like.

It's obvious that Smur needs help, and even though he left Draggon, I think I agree with Lordy here that he should go seek her assistance in translating the spidery looking text.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 9:32 am    Post subject:  

Look for more artifacts. If they're going to use the stairs and explore each level as they go, they are going to be very tired and out of breath by the time they reach the top. And he is on the 100th level. But 110? Can he go up further and explore? Maybe more useful artifacts or knowledge could be found.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 6:14 pm    Post subject:  

Hmm, nice.

Well, Smur has the firestick- what is he afraid of?
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Chinaren



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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 2:59 am    Post subject:  

D-Lotus wrote: Hmm, nice.

Well, Smur has the firestick- what is he afraid of?

Well, there are several of them, and they could also have firesticks! :shock:
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 6:40 pm    Post subject:  

In that case, try to isolate them before attacking them.
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Chinaren



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Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 12:41 am    Post subject:  

Poll is up then. Splash the puddle of voting.
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Chinaren



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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 8:50 pm    Post subject:  

Mm, 3 votes, one for each option. Any others?
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 1:10 pm    Post subject:  

I WAS IN THE RESTROOM WHEN I THOUGHT OF AN INTERESTING IDEA. Ravenwing wrote: It's obvious that Smur needs help, and even though he left Draggon, I think I agree with Lordy here that he should go seek her assistance in translating the spidery looking text. I AGREE, BUT I ALSO AGREE WITH Crunchyfrog wrote: Look for more artifacts. AND D-Lotus wrote: In that case try to isolate them before attacking them. SOOO, WHY NOT HAVE HIM GO LOOKING FOR DRAGGON, KILLING THE TRIBESMEN ON THE WAY, WHILE COLLECTING ARTIFACTS?
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 3:56 pm    Post subject:  

Hi Fideath, welcome to the story and IF!

If you vote for the last option, it would be a tie again, and I could do just what you said.

This one is next on my 'to do' list, so voting will close soon.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 5:58 pm    Post subject:  

Just because I like making things hard for you china, I voted for the last option. May mayhem ensue!
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 12:23 pm    Post subject:  

!?! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROFL LOL!!!
A TIE!
ON ALL THREE!!!
OMG!!!
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 11:55 pm    Post subject:  

Next chapter going up, so closing this one down. Thanks for playing!
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