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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:44 pm    Post subject: Rise of Shadows chapter 6 - Pursuit.  

Chapter 6 - Pursuit.

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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:10 am    Post subject:  

I have no plans to abandon this one so far Zeph! And thanks for your support!

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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 5:10 am    Post subject:  

FINALLY!!!!!!!

But i also say....................

DESTROY THEM ALL WITH WHATEVER YOU'VE GOT!!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 4:08 pm    Post subject:  

K, any other comments?
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:33 am    Post subject:  

Do they have probes capable of FTL-drive?
If so, jump ahead to Vance B and prepare an ambush while having probes follow the Dragnet in case it changes course.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 3:49 pm    Post subject:  

Ooh. That's a cool idea MM! :D
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 9:53 pm    Post subject:  

Ive caught upagain China and am liking it still.

I say keep teh ship in your sights. You cant risk loosing it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:40 pm    Post subject:  

Losing, one 'o' there Fox, but thanks for reading! Glad to see you still around.
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 10:36 pm    Post subject:  

Very well, poll is up. Beam down to the planet of voting.
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 12:36 pm    Post subject:  

Quote: deteriated
I lead a team on board, but we encountered strong resistance.
Very well, lets just say you theory is right

Some spelling errors, but fun chappy. I voted for the drones.
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:09 am    Post subject:  

Sorry for the delay in the next chapter peeps. It is coming, slowly, I promise!
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:44 am    Post subject:  

Quote: I see Ive struck a cord, said Cole.

Actually that's "chord" not "cord".

Communications really needs to be opened up. A message to others of a potentially enormous "epidemic" (if nothing else can describe it) should be shared with the additional advice that standard quarantine measures have been insufficient..... And stuff like that.

The Dragnet is the objective as I see it, and the biggest threat to containment. They're mobile and all they need to do is get to a populated planet. I was outvoted, but I think we should stay with the ship to make certain the threat is dealt with. If it is heading where we think it is, try to arrive at the same time (or just slightly before) and destroy it before it can land. It's fairly damaged already.

I'm surprised we don't have any offensive options, considering we know their flight path and we're a faster ship. Why not speed ahead of it and throw out mines or some kind of explosives?


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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 5:14 pm    Post subject:  

Lebrenth wrote:
Communications really needs to be opened up. A message to others of a potentially enormous "epidemic" (if nothing else can describe it) should be shared with the additional advice that standard quarantine measures have been insufficient..... And stuff like that.

The Dragnet is the objective as I see it, and the biggest threat to containment. They're mobile and all they need to do is get to a populated planet. I was outvoted, but I think we should stay with the ship to make certain the threat is dealt with. If it is heading where we think it is, try to arrive at the same time (or just slightly before) and destroy it before it can land. It's fairly damaged already.

I'm surprised we don't have any offensive options, considering we know their flight path and we're a faster ship. Why not speed ahead of it and throw out mines or some kind of explosives?[/color]


Well, they may just do that Lebs! ;) I've finally started the next chapter of this, so look out for it in the coming days. Sorry for the delay people!
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 2:58 am    Post subject:  

I've always enjoyed your skiffy's Chin, so this one was the obvious choice for my next catchup-choice. Did your original skiffy ever end, was it Captain Ben? Also the other one with the strange 'Leader' type world.

You're right though - for some reason they never drew in quite the crowd some of your others did.

Anyhoo - I'm up-to-date on this one now, and whether I'm late or not, I voted for the probes, and jump ahead plan.

This has been enthralling reading, with a nice touch of spooky and I'm looking forward to where it's going. The badies at the moment have some characteristics shared with the Flood from the Halo stories, although the freezing is an interesting addition.

Happy Writing :)
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