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The Dark



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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:49 pm    Post subject: The Dark chapter 9. Slime Time.  

Warning! The following contains profanity, violence and really
twisted sexual content. Do not read further if you are easily offended, or even if you are mediumly offended.

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Chapter 9. Slime Time.
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The Dark



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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:52 pm    Post subject:  

Which way does Gloom go? Not the most exciting decision, but there you go...

The Dark wishes to thank all those who have added this to their favourites. The story is now in the top 5.
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Mephistopheles



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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:46 am    Post subject:  

admin or absorption? hard choice. Admin could possibly grant him info that he needs to access higher levels, or perhaps hard copies of interesting stuff. the absorption chamber though, hell, sounds like the place where all the interesting stuff happens. probably easier to access the absorption chamber though. Research is going to be hard to break into, probably the tightest security possible in the joint. and the holding pens sound boring. people that ready to be slaughtered or altered. could maybe get laid there, but that is about all i can see that would be of any benefit.

Good chapter. I think that was a quite daring chapter. well written though, and displays yet more of our wonderful protagonists thoughts. keep it up the good work!
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The Meaning Of Fear



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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:50 pm    Post subject:  

Nice chapter, Dark. Not hanging back on the obscenity as usual. :lol:

I'm not too sure about the DP, but I don't think the admin is the right way. Gloom should check out the absorption and pens first.
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Chinaren



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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:22 pm    Post subject:  

Don't hold back there Dark!

Mmm. I like the sound of the Absorbtion chamber. Sounds... absorbing. ;)
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Mastermind



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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:49 am    Post subject:  

Research area. Because Knowledge is Power. :smart:
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CunningFox



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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:02 pm    Post subject:  

If the holding area has prisoners, maybe he can let them go and they would cause a distraction?

Even more twisted than usual Dark. Nice work!
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Crunchyfrog



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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 3:09 pm    Post subject:  

In a previous chapter there is talk of The Dark becoming stronger with each summoning and soon he would be strong enough to escape his masters. I think this place has something to do with what The Dark is. At the moment Gloom knows virtually nothing about The Dark, so he doesn't know what he's supposed to be looking for.

The Absorbtion Chamber, Research lab and Admin block will probably yield a lot of answers to Gloom, but he needs to know what the question is first. Undoubtedly the question will present itself with the discovery of the inhabitants of the holding pen.

Holding pen, I say! :-D
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The Dark



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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 4:26 pm    Post subject:  

So be it. The poll is up. Vote away my Gloomy friends.
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The Dark



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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 10:23 pm    Post subject:  

Stop the presses!

The first option is wrong. It should be: 'The Absorption chamber'.

What can be done about this errror?
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Mephistopheles



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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 11:09 pm    Post subject:  

delete the poll and start over?
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The Dark



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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 11:48 pm    Post subject:  

Very well my gratuitous friend. So you say, so shall it be done.

The following 'Darkies' votes have been culled along with the defective poll:

Crunchyfrog, Mastermind, Mephistopheles

The Dark apologises for the inconvenience, and ask you revote on this shiny new version.
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The Meaning Of Fear



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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:23 pm    Post subject:  

Four.

Way.

Tie.

Yay! :lol:

I think the release prisoners and non-release options votes should be tallied together... After all, he's going to go there either way, right?
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