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Kalanna Rai
Joined: 21 Jan 2006
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Location: The Frozen North
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| Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:42 am Post subject: A Titan Rises |
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| The story has launched, the spoiler excerpt has been removed to prevent the skewing of the future... |
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Thunderbird
Joined: 13 Sep 2009
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Location: Rising from the ashes
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| Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 7:25 pm Post subject: |
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| This was really fun to read, Kalanna... once again I commend you on your VAST improvements and growth as an author. I'm truly jealous of the leaps and bounds you've shown in your writing skills. This was really great stuff! I found the fantasy/sci-fi blend so evocative it was crazy... so much I wanted to know from what you wrote and its that ability to spark curiosity that makes a read really good... well, one of the things that can anyhow. Your descriptions and pacing are great too. Still gotta watch the spelling now and then though ;) But I'm not going to go all anal pointing out the niggly things when the whole is THIS good! |
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Lilith
Joined: 10 Feb 2007
Posts: 1597
Location: Happily curled up in a Daemon's lap
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| Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:19 pm Post subject: |
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I say again as I said in the Inn, I want one of those. And when are you going to be delivering this in SG format?
As for titles, I think A Titan Rises is fine, however my grammar sense is going off for some reason and I can't ignore that...
So...
Waking the Titans ?
Titans Rising? |
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