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kkdestiny · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 11:19 am Post subject: This is Lily. Lily hears voices.

(i love things like these :D)

Lily is an 8 year old girl. She lives in the woods, away from town with her mother and older sister. She likes dolls, and has a lot of them. She also hears voices, and needs help listening to the right one.

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Starting:

The sun shines through Lily's window. She is clutching a stuffed puppy and wakes up to see Miss Littlepockets staring at her. She smiles and gets out of bed to start the day.

1. She's boring, and has no boobs.
2. How about a Tea party today?
3. I bet your sister is already eating breakfast...
4. That doll is old, give her a funeral. With fire....

Andolyn · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 1:45 pm Post subject:

I have to say, i'm a little bit confused on what we're doing exactly, but that's okay. haha!

kkdestiny · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 3:03 pm Post subject:

well ok

1. start off with a sentence like "this is jim/kim/ted/bradley"
2. describe the character's age/gender/location and basic living conditions
3. describe romm they're in/ what they're doing
4. ask the 'audience' to make an adventure for him/her.

Hmm, i guess i should just describe this as a popular, much shorter version of the concept story games that we already have on the site :D

hang on and I'll give a link to a successful one that's been made into an animation thingy...

Lilith · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 3:07 pm Post subject:

Usually SGame chapters are between 750-2500 words depending on the writer's preference. This would probably qualify as a word game. :) Just helping!

But yes... Fire... pretty. XD

kkdestiny · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 3:08 pm Post subject:

Thank you Lilith :)

so, who is active these days?

kkdestiny · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2012 2:58 pm Post subject:

.....

Not many. I see.

well, I guess I'll have to try my old tactics then....but if it doesn't work then the people aren't gunna be happy XD

sagittaeri · Joined: 05 May 2012 Posts: 367

I still am unclear on how this works, but I'll play along and see what happens I suppose.

kkdestiny · Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2012 8:11 pm Post subject:

Feeling the excitement of burning something build within her, Lily goes over to her sock drawer where she keeps the matches she stole from her mom. Quietly, she dressed Miss Littlepockets in white and set up the funeral area again.

With another smile, she lit the corner of the dolls dress on fire and layed her down in her final resting spot. "Miss Littlepockets, you have been a good Dollie but it's time for you to move on now...I hope there are tea parties in dollie heaven."

When she was done with the funeral, she put water on the ashes and open the window to make sure her room didn't smell like smoke.

As her room aired out, the voices started coming again.

1. Hey, let's go see your mom.
2. Yes, we must tell her your having your problems again. And stealing isn't nice either.
3. Shut up! How about we steal one of your sisters dollies? They're prettier.
4. ...or we can just burn them all.

sagittaeri · Joined: 05 May 2012 Posts: 367

This SG seems creepy, lol. I voted...interested to see where this goes.

kkdestiny · Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2012 7:35 am Post subject:

hey hey it's not my fault XD

Apparently people like burning dolls >>

kkdestiny · Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:43 am Post subject:

*sigh* no one else but Sagi voted.

With fear, she realized what she had done. She realized that the voices were back. She had to find her mother, she had to take her medicine. She ran out of the room, down the stairs, into the kitchen and grabbed onto her mother's skirt.

"Mom,mom! I need to take my medicine! The voices- they told me to burn Miss Littlepockets!"

Swiftly, with a practiced motion, he mother drew out the pills from her apron pocket and gave them to her with some water. She watched until they were swallowed. Then she sighed, pat Lily on the head, and told her to go to her 'waiting corner'.

1. Ok, stay in the corner. We can see her just fine from there.
2. ....disgusting. Hun, turn towards the wall like a good little girl.
3. I want my breakfast, damn it! How come we have to wait longer?
4. Screw the corner, you'll be fine. But I wonder what your mom would be like if she took those stupid pills...

Vishal Muralidharan · Joined: 24 Aug 2010 Posts: 867 Location: City Of IF!

Not entirely sure how it works, but I like it, lol! Anyway, voted xD

sagittaeri · Joined: 05 May 2012 Posts: 367

I think we're the voices in this poor little schizophrenic girl!

Voted.

kkdestiny · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 9:46 am Post subject:

pretty much.

We have a three way tie! How about a tie breaker folks?

Jack_D.Mented · Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:42 pm Post subject:

Better late than never, right?

We need to let one of the really twisted voices win!

Seraphi · Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:08 pm Post subject:

Oooo...creepy. I like it!

Voted. :D

kkdestiny · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 3:24 pm Post subject:

Lily nodded ad made her way over to the corner, but the sound of fork on plate distracted her. her stomache announced its protest while she watched her sister eat at the table, not a care in the world.

With a little nudging from one of the voices, she decided that she could wait it out and pass the time getting some food.

Her sister looked up, having heard the commotion inside the kitchen.

"Hey Squirt, didn't mom tell you to wait?"

Lily paused in the middle of stuffing her face to contemplate what to say...she just wanted to keep eating. It's already past breakfas time as it is....t

Jack_D.Mented · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 5:27 pm Post subject:

Oh, if I can make a voice recommendation...

"Jump across the table and stab that skank in the face with your fork!"

kkdestiny · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2013 5:28 pm Post subject:

Thank you, but i do not accept customized actions, please choose the option you feel comes closest to your sentiments :D

kkdestiny · Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 2:10 am Post subject:

>>

I'm going to be closing this if it remain inactive.