City of IF

HalfEmptyHero

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HalfEmptyHero · Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2014 6:50 pm Post subject:

Ok, so the decision point is essentially who shows up in the morning. I was thinking one of the following:

1. She is the daughter of an important person in the government

2. She is the daughter of a crime boss

3. She is simply married and it was her husband.

I am also open to other interesting options.

PopeAlessandrosXVIII · Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 12:31 am Post subject: I Think. . .

Okay, I have to say, this is very "Manley" and had me laughing, a LOT. I am still giggling as read this :lol: The imagery is great and even had me gagging a bit at the smell of that man. . .Anyways, good work, very well done.

Hmmm, DP, DP. . . . How about instead of the daughter of an important person in the government, she IS an important person in the government and those at the door were her handlers who shoot first and forget to ask questions ever?

HalfEmptyHero · Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 5:27 am Post subject: Re: I Think. . .

PopeAlessandrosXVIII wrote:
Hmmm, DP, DP. . . . How about instead of the daughter of an important person in the government, she IS an important person in the government and those at the door were her handlers who shoot first and forget to ask questions ever?

This has just given me a good idea that I think I am going to go with. I can't spoil the fun though, so you will have to read on to see how things pan out!

PopeAlessandrosXVIII · Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:58 am Post subject:

I will read on as soon as there is something to rear, I promise! I am glad I could inspire :P

PopeAlessandrosXVIII · Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:58 am Post subject:

I will read on as soon as there is something to rear, I promise! I am glad I could inspire :P

HalfEmptyHero · Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 2:12 pm Post subject:

Part Two: Dude looks like a lady

Glenda thought about it.

"I don't know what to think about this." She said.

"Yes, " her handler replied, "It is a bit of a precarious position."

"On one hand..." she said. "But in some ways it's not too bad."

"It truly is a unique situation," he said.

"But why him?" Glenda asked, "He doesn't seem in any way special."

"A consequence of circumstance," he said, "He happened to be serving some time on Mars and we needed someone. He filled the position."

"He doesn't know about it, does he?" She asked.

"Not in the least. We don't like to take chances," he said. "Of course, we never imagined anything like this happening."

"I should hope not."

* * *

The ship smelled like day old nachos. I wasn't surprised: old Sally Mae Johnson was a junker far past her prime. Me and her had sucked the life out of many a naive young melon gopper. Promise a lass a future and she'll give you just about anything. Unfortunately, I was now left with the scent of a thousand lost souls, none of whom had cleaned before leaving.

I went into the bathroom and peed on the floor. Couldn't help it: two streams, one bowl. Besides, I was still messed up from earlier. What kind of lady kicks you out in the morning before breakfast. Sure, sometimes a lady'll wake up and be too repulsed for morning sex, but would always make breakfast. What is this world coming to?

And what was the hurry? Who the hell would barge in that early in the morning. Was she married? Probably. Fuck it, I thought, I need to get more sleep. I left the yellow puddle on the floor and found my bedroom.

* * *

I was having a good dream. Lots of women—one me. I had just slain the evil space monster and was about to college my reward, when ...

"Wake up," the bitch shook me.

"Huh?" I said. I rubbed my eyes. It was Glenda. "What are you doing here.?"

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Okay, this was a short one but the decision point will affect how things play out and it fits nicely here. What is Glenda going to do?

1.) More manmeat.
2.) Tell the secret.
3.) Try to become another lost soul (ask him to take her away on his spaceship).
4.) A combination of the two.

I'm not sure which option I want the most. I can work with any of them, but I think certain choices will be funnier, but I don't want to spoil the fun. What do you think?

PopeAlessandrosXVIII · Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2015 9:30 pm Post subject: Sorry

I will do my best to get this read and reviewed before I leave tomorrow morning. *Bows* Sorry for taking so long!

HalfEmptyHero · Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2015 12:18 pm Post subject: Re: Sorry

PopeAlessandrosXVIII wrote: I will do my best to get this read and reviewed before I leave tomorrow morning. *Bows* Sorry for taking so long!

Cool.

PopeAlessandrosXVIII · Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2015 10:29 am Post subject: I Think. . . . .

I have not stopped laughing or yelling "More penis!" since I read this last night. I just, I d'know, maybe I'm just easily amused at the moment, but I can't get over my silly giggles :rofl:

*Works on breathing a bit*

Okay, so, um, I think a combo of 1 and 2 would be amusing as option three, as little as I've seen of her, seems a bit out of character, and as I am uber amused by it, I have to go with the more manmeat. And I wanna know the secret. So, yeah, 1 and 2 *Grin* Good chapter Hero-kun!

kkdestiny · Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 4:34 pm Post subject:

If I could vote for a combination of 1 and 2 too, that'd be great.