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scribe siren
Joined: 20 Mar 2016
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| Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2019 11:18 pm Post subject: TRACE COMIC BOOK |
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Wondering why I am posting as trace comic books. I'm using different poses from photos taken by myself or either on internet.
This is just for practice. To draw humans. So don't worry, this is not for sale....
Ok so our friend just killed a girl. I'm hoping you would be able to assist in what should happen next in page number 2.
READY: for putting up poll soon. |
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Lebrenth
Joined: 29 Dec 2005
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Location: Utah
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| Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2019 5:50 am Post subject: Get rid of the body |
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Nicely done! The figures look so good! I love the word bubble, too.
I'd like to see the guilty girl do the right thing and call an ambulance. A panel with the paramedics might be visually complex but it would be interesting to see. |
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Novelest_Ninjagirl
Joined: 09 Dec 2007
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Location: The inn. Probably. Come check!
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| Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2019 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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| I concur, show guilty girl calling paramedics. Or performing some sort of first aid herself, maybe. |
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scribe siren
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| Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2019 11:39 pm Post subject: UPDATE: OBVI |
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WHO is she talking to on phone.
Is it a deal she made to get money.
Is it her parents -- what will happen now!
This time ill wait for others to give some awesome drawing ideas |
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Lebrenth
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2019 4:52 am Post subject: Re: UPDATE: OBVI |
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Nicely done! I'm impressed how well you put together the busy scenes.
scribe siren wrote: WHO is she talking to on phone.
I'm inclined to say it's a guy that both her and the girl she attacked is interested in. There's a love triangle that led to the attack in the first place because the attacker got jealous. The guy is stunned and asks advice from a friend. |
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Chinaren
Joined: 05 Sep 2005
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Location: https://www.NeilHartleyBooks.com
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| Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2019 2:56 am Post subject: |
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I think there was some kind of blackmail involved here, and someone had had enough of it, leading to the argument.
I like this style of story! |
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scribe siren
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| Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2019 9:51 am Post subject: |
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Posting new page tomorrow.
Keep eyes open. :D |
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