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The quest begins. We have initiated Chakra’s development as a character, and introduced a few of her friends. The Wise White Witch, whose personage was once used by Chakra’s friends to tease her, appears to have arbitrarily placed a great responsibility on her. Chakra must choose an escort to safely deliver the Thinker to a destination in an unknown land. The various skills of the escort should be well rounded to successfully challenge the unknown. Chakra can only choose a limited number to accompany her.
Summary: Veronici- Finer Magician with mastery of Wind magic, can also cast a little Ice and Water magic. Possesses good leadership traits
Seani- Finer Magician with mastery of Water magic, can also cast Earth magic. Keen interest in beasts
Asher- Coarser Magician with mastery of Health magic. Developing Pounce skills as well. Strong leadership abilities
Knute- Coarser Magician with mastery of Strike and Pounce. Strong, heavy hitter
Choice- Coarser Magician with mastery of Curse, developing the Finer magic of Light
Holden- Coarser Magician who is close to mastering the extremely powerful but dark magic Oblivion, mastery of Curse
Bathini- Finer Magician with mastery of Light and Shadow magics. Older and more mature than Chakra and her friends, she continues to help Chakra develop her Light magic
Ordoc- Coarser Magician with mastery of Health and Strike. Older and more mature than Chakra and her friends, he has a working relationship with the people of the Mainland.
Four people will travel with Chakra and the Wise White Witch. Who do you think she should choose? Suggest individual characters or teams, and I’ll set up a poll in a day or two based on those suggestions.
Chp3 Poll: Choose the Team to Escort the White Witch
1) Seani, Ordoc, Holden, and Asher 7
2)Veronici, Holden, Asher, and Ordoc 5
3)Bathini, Asher, Knute, and Holden 1
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 2:21 pm Post subject: |
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i think she should sit morosly by the water and feel sorry for her self.
you never know whats hiding under the mysterious life givn blue of the ocean whether it be bad or good , evil or benine, it would have alot of impact on the story , and the pathetic fallacy of deep blue waters and rain will serve as a great way to keep the mood, plus the emotive contenet of her sitting by the water felling bad may call to an empathic deep sea mystical creature which may befreind her or attack her.
so letting her sit by the water could leave a lot of plot twists open for use 
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Asher, Knute, Bathini, and Ordoc.
Now for my reasons:
Asher-this group will need a strong leader, and I think Asher with his Health and attack skills will be a great asset.
Knute-A bit crazy, but we need a little humour in the group. But also he would also be a good person to act as defense.
Bathini-She can help Chakra improve her Light skills and it would be good to have another woman in the group other than just Chakra and the Wise White Witch (WWW).
Ordoc-He may have contacts in the Mainland that could be useful. Also he could help Asher with the Health spells.
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Asher, Knute, Bathini, and Ordoc.
Now for my reasons:
Asher-this group will need a strong leader, and I think Asher with his Health and attack skills will be a great asset.
Knute-A bit crazy, but we need a little humour in the group. But also he would also be a good person to act as defense.
Bathini-She can help Chakra improve her Light skills and it would be good to have another woman in the group other than just Chakra and the Wise White Witch (WWW).
Ordoc-He may have contacts in the Mainland that could be useful. Also he could help Asher with the Health spells.
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| i think she should pick Veronici, Asher, Knute, and Holden. These people seem to have the most interest in her, i wanna see wat they do.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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Have two for Asher and Knute (four if you count all of RW's posts- it's a talent I guess). Any more?
Hope you guys are enjoying the story so far.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:55 pm Post subject: |
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| Asher and Veronici I say. Asher seems good at healing, and Veronici has good light magic skills, though why cant we choose holden?
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Asher and Holdan
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| Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 1:24 am Post subject: |
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| Muaddib wrote: | | Asher and Veronici I say. Asher seems good at healing, and Veronici has good light magic skills, though why cant we choose holden? |
Certainly feel free to suggest Holden. Chakra has to choose four to accompany her.
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| ordok bathini asher and holden
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Great new chapter Ethereal. Very interesting decision point. Its almost like you have something to prove. 
Here are my choices for a good group.
Ordoc. Mainland contacts and health mastery are obvious choices. Plus a good striker may come in handy.
Bathini. Spell mastery and a good teacher for the slow times.
Holden. Maybe not a great choice for this quest, but I want to know more about him. Has curse mastery.
Seani. A friend with earth magic. Plus she's hot.
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| Mordok wrote: | Great new chapter Ethereal. Very interesting decision point. Its almost like you have something to prove.
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All I have to say is: 
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Great chapter again Ethereal!
I'd go with Seani, Asher, Holden, and Ordoc.
Seani has a keen interest in beasts, which means she already knows some of the dangers out there and might be better off at mapping a path around the more dangerous areas.
Asher is an obvious leader with strong health magic, and I don't know why but I kind of like him.
Holden seems to be a good choice also because he knows a different style of magic than anyone. He would be a fierce opponent if they are forced to fight. But since we know so little about him, I think we could replace him with Bathini.
Ordoc already has the contacts, would be a decent guard and probably knows more on how to deal with people they come across or cities.
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| Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 3:07 pm Post subject: Chp3 Poll |
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I tallied the recommendations so far. Asher and Holden stand out in front, with Ordoc and Bathini closely trailing. Veronici, Seani and Knute have all been suggested. The only one not mentioned so far has been Choice (well, I suppose he didn't want to go into the Unknown Realm anyways.)
I set up a poll based on the suggestions I have so far. The poll will run for seven days. I haven't even started the next chapter, so I imagine this poll will actually run to its conclusion.
Vote on the team that you feel will have the greatest success escorting Chakra and the Wise White Witch into the Unknown Realm.
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I've missed a couple, but I'm back now with a vote for Seani, Ordoc, Holden, and Asher.
Excellent story, with rich detail and good flow. I'm enjoying it.
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Of the three teams I pick the first - If I had posted earlier I might have wanted a slightly different group, but I missed that phase.
I think Seani will be a valuable companion, with an assortment of skills. Asher and Holden are on all the lists, so the choice all boils down to the other two really.
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I was just wanting suggestions earlier, to get an idea who seemed favored or preferred. I knew I'd boil it down to three options for the poll, since combinations of four can make a bit too many options. I used tick marks to tally each time a character's name was mentioned to include as part of the escort.
I placed the two most popular in every group, and at least one other female character in every group, when I broke it down into three teams.
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| ethereal_fauna wrote: | | Ravenwing wrote: | D, just shut up. 8) Your rambling will make peoples' ears fall off.  |
Well what with the lame poll I suppose he was inspired to ramble. Now I feel such guilt for subjecting everyone to such a poll. Ohhh, my own personal agony...the pain, the pain.
The next chapter I'm moving beyond just Chakra and her issues. I hope this inspires a better poll and a little more interest in my story. Of course if Chakra ends up sitting morosely by the water and feeling sorry for herself, then I'll have to add a little more fluff to the next chapter. I'll get us there, though, and hopefully in an intriguing way.
You guys are such task masters. 8) |
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| Great chapter. I missed the suggesting characters phase too. I voted for the option with Seani and Ordoc, although I think I would have liked Knute instead of Ordoc in that group.
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I am working on the next chapter. If the voting should suddenly swing a different way, I'll have to change a few names and scenes. Chp4 should reveal a little more about the direction Chakra's development as a character is taking and set the stage for greater action.
This storygame has been nominated again for storygame of the month. When voting time comes around I encourage everyone to VOTE FOR FINITE COSMOS. I really want to see my work in its own forum (of course!)
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| ethereal_fauna wrote: | Have two for Asher and Knute (four if you count all of RW's posts- it's a talent I guess). Any more?
Hope you guys are enjoying the story so far. |
ARGH! Why do these computers do this. Sorry Ethereal for crowding your forum. 8)
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Voted third group cause it's only one that has Holden...she needs a temptation too....
No offense meant or anything, ethereal, but this story is getting kind of boring.... At least I speak honestly....you really need something to hook me, if you want to hook me....
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| D-Lotus wrote: | Voted third group cause it's only one that has Holden...she needs a temptation too....
No offense meant or anything, ethereal, but this story is getting kind of boring.... At least I speak honestly....you really need something to hook me, if you want to hook me.... |
Who would want to catch you D? You're not that big of a fish. 8)
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| Ravenwing wrote: | | D-Lotus wrote: | Voted third group cause it's only one that has Holden...she needs a temptation too....
No offense meant or anything, ethereal, but this story is getting kind of boring.... At least I speak honestly....you really need something to hook me, if you want to hook me.... |
Who would want to catch you D? You're not that big of a fish. 8) |
Wanna look inside my pants and see?
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Do I want to? For all I know, I could take a look and seeing nothing at all. 8)
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| Ravenwing wrote: | | Do I want to? For all I know, I could take a look and seeing nothing at all. 8) |
Don't be shy Rave, I won't bite....
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I am not scared. Why should I be, especially when I look and don't see anything. Or even better it could be so tiny that it wouldn't scare a flea. 8)
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That was lame...you said the same thing twice.....you have a lot to learn, Rave...but you're probably just pretending you didn't see anything because you don't like guys? 
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| Calm down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I know that was lame. It was to show that you're lame in every single way. If I didn't like guys I wouldn't be having this useless conversation with one about the anatomy hidden under a pair of pants. But if you really must know, I don't have a very high opinion of your gender, especially those in high school.
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That was lame as well....maybe you don't know how to enjoy life, Rave?
Don't worry Muaddib, it's all fun and jokes here
....until someone gets hurt. :twisted:
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D, your jokes are just as lame. If I wanted to be funny, I would say something funny. But presently, I am not in the right mind set to be funny. So just shut up. Go ahead and jump in a lake and be caught by some angler. 8)
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I asked this yesterday, before the evil post-stealing fairy made all my messages go Poof!
But am I boring anyone else besides D to tears, or is it just him?
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| Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:11 am Post subject: |
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I'm liking it.
It would be cooler if there were some vampire ninja's though.
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| Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:16 am Post subject: |
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| Mordok wrote: | | It would be cooler if there were some vampire ninja's though. |
Vampire ninjas were already taken, so alas, I'm winging it here on my own....
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| Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 12:15 pm Post subject: |
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I am not bored by it. It's a very unique approach to writing a story. Well since the vampire ninjas are out of the question, you could add flying monkeys and smoking talking trees. 8) (Just read a review on my school's production of The Wizard of Oz.)
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| Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 3:23 pm Post subject: |
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I'll bear in mind both lying monkeys and smoking, talking trees.
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| Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:43 pm Post subject: |
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Whens the new chapter gonna be uP?
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| Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:04 pm Post subject: |
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| ethereal_fauna wrote: | I asked this yesterday, before the evil post-stealing fairy made all my messages go Poof!
But am I boring anyone else besides D to tears, or is it just him? |
Nah, probably just me and all the 16 year olds males that don't like fairies in the world.... 
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| Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 3:15 am Post subject: |
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See D, you're just too difficult to please...
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