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A wolf that slams into you and shoves you off the edge of your rocky perch and to the ground below. |
Zephyr wrote: |
I had noticed the sentence as well, and the problem wasn’t style but grammar. It simply wasn’t a complete sentence. That said, I understand there are a number of professional authors who, in the course of prose, use a stylistic manner that at times deviates from the usual ‘rules’ of grammar. I figured this was just such an example and wasn’t going to mention it at all until D brought it up. |
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