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Personally, I think he should go see the sub-leader. Maybe, if he gets the opportunity, do some digging afterwards about Dept 7 - but I don't think he'll get anywhere on that line of inquiry.
I'm thinking he should try to dig himself in deeper with the rebels now though. Dept. 7 is telling him to do some pretty arrest-worthy stuff - so if he's going to have to do that whatever happens, he might as well join the resistance and fight for a better way of life. Offer them co-operation in exchange for them keeping Dept 7 from destroying his life.
Good chapter Chinaren. The only thing that spoiled it for me was the lifting of Key's letter from Dear Dotty. I actually enjoyed the chapter less because you did it, because usually, the episodes of Wall are so original, and that made it seem a bit like a cheap rip-off *apologetic face* Plus, there's all that annoying 'intellectual property' ruling in the FAQs that I'm not comfortable with authors breaking.
As I said, though, the plot is great. Keep it coming - and sorry for the delay in replying. I've had to do a lot of quiz reading this weekend, it's been a bit mind-numbing
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No, we're still here Chinaren*. Personally I thought that using (read stealing) Key's letter was a good idea. It seems to tie the stories together more, and even though I know they are no longer along the same path, you did base it on Dear Dotty, and I think seeing them acutally set in the same world would be really quite impressive.
But for the decision point I suspect he might well check out the Hall of Records while he has the chance, merely to gage his curiousity if nothing else.
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Quote: | The only thing that spoiled it for me was the lifting of Key's letter from Dear Dotty. I actually enjoyed the chapter less because you did it, because usually, the episodes of Wall are so original, and that made it seem a bit like a cheap rip-off *apologetic face* Plus, there's all that annoying 'intellectual property' ruling in the FAQs that I'm not comfortable with authors breaking. |
I was a bit unsure about it myself. It broke away a little from the story in some senses. I din't think about the IP rule though. I have adjusted it now, hopefully enough so that no one will ever know.
Now then, I suppose the options are fairly straight forward this time, so I have stuck up a poll. It has limited suggestions, as he may only have time to visit two of the three, and he really should visit the Sub Leader as one of them. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Voted for the first one China. Looking forward to the next chappie. :biggrin:
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Either that, or he'll have to create a few clones of his main character
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Wow - such a decisive bunch we are.
I voted to get rid of the cube first and then go see the sub-leader - if, for whatever reason, the sub-leader gets annoyed with us, we could find ourselves escorted from the building without the chance to do anything else. Or worse, searched before entering and the cube discovered. _________________ The path of my life is strewn with cowpats from the Devil's own Satanic Herd!
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LOL!! A four way tie. Smee makes a good point about the cube. I din't think of that.
Anyway, I have my trust four sided coin ready to flip in-case of sustained tie. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Section 11. Lies and Damn Lies.
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Intrigue! Plots! Lies! What’s a Correctional officer to do?
Some more information then, but who is telling the truth? Is anyone?
More immediately, what is Gallows to say now? Is it time to throw his lot in with one side or the other?
Let’s hear your devious and twisty thinking!
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Another tricky yet excellent chapter Chinaren
I'm very disinclined to throw in my lot with the head of security. Working for security makes you an expandable pawn, no matter how loyal you are. Department 7 and its head have shown no concern over your welfare or that of Jane. That one's to be avoided at all costs.
I guess it means, for now, throwing in your lot with the sub-leader.
We can't rebuff the guy who's asking for information now, so we have to make something up. Something that sounds plausible and that they'll believe. We run the risk that they have bugging devices and can verify what we say, but if they had that sort of technology available, I don't think they'd have a strong enough motivation to screw with us in this way.
So, assuming that our evidence is the only source, we should...
Tell this contact that the sub-leader has suspicions about the head of our police station, and has asked us to make regular reports on him and his activities. Tell them he seemed fairly paranoid about the whole thing, and that you don't want to do it but you don't see any choice as an otherwise loyal citizen. Act naive and dumb, look to them to advice and continue feeding them horse-puckey.
That's all I got for now
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Intrigue by the bucketload! Great chapter China, I'd missed this story. :biggrin:
A few suggestions:
Quote: | Gallows fell in beside him, every cell in his body screamed caution. |
I think this works better as 'screaming', though it's up to you.
Quote: | I was the one who arranged this appointment with the Leader |
Wasn't it with the sub-leader? Or am I getting all confuzzled?
Quote: | The agency is called Department 7, you will not have heard of them as their existence is a highly kept secret. |
I think this sentance seems a bit clunky. It would be better to seperate them, I think: 'The agency is called Department 7. You would not have heard of them; their existence is a highly kept secret' Something like that.
Quote: | he couldn’t even trust those in the Rebel camp, well, even less than he did anyway. |
Again, this seems like a clunky way of putting it. Seperating 'Rebel camp' from 'Well, even less than he did anyway' just sounds better, to me.
Now, what to do.... I think that the Sub-Leader seems to have far too much information to be truly worried about some sort of plot. I think he himself is planning something, and wants people he thinks he can trust on his side. That, or he's very paranoid, and that is never good.
Department 7 are scary and ruthless, and I think Gallows would do well to avoid them, but it seems that he has little choice. He should agree to working with them, giving them just enough information to placate them but not so that he is truly working for them. This means that the rebels are all thats left. To me, they seem to make the most sense, and are the most sincere, though it is obviously a dangerous path to take. He should be wary, but try and integrate himself into them. If he does, and they turn out to be lying scum, then he can report it all to the Sub-Leader, for 'the Good of the State'
As for the agent next to him, I think Gallows needs to releive some stress, so blowing his brains out would be fun, but quite detrimental to Gallow's wellbeing. So that's out of the question... damn.
I guess he should just tell him something about the Sub-Leader wants officers within The Correctional Department to be extra vigilant, as there seems to be problems emerging that need 'correcting', so he was talking to one officer who he thinks, because of his recent 'fame', would have influence over the other officers, and could urge them to be all-the-more vigilant. Something like that; Shady's idea was better.
*holds breath* _________________ "Humankind cannot stand too much reality" - T.S. Elliot
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Shady the Furry Goblin! [Demon's, Satan and Slobadan Milosevic!] - Chapter 3
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Good points Soily, thanks. I will amend.
And good comments as well from both of ye. Is it getting tricky yet? _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Personally I was convinced by D7, and would be more than happy to see him side with them, dispite their hidden adgendas. Not only do they seem more convincing, but they mentioned his own ascension, something I feel they'd be more able to provide than the Sub-Leader. _________________ Punishment leads to Fear. Fear leads to Obedience. Obedience leads to Freedom. Therefore, Punishment leads to Freedom.
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Quote: | Personally I was convinced by D7, and would be more than happy to see him side with them |
Hehe. I was quite happy with how that conversation turned out when I wrote it. I almost convinced myself! _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Quote: | I almost convinced myself |
Only almost - are you saying we shouldn't be convinced _________________ The path of my life is strewn with cowpats from the Devil's own Satanic Herd!
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another good one ren. I think he should start to ddecide who to join here. The obvious ones are the rebels but lets not discard d7 and the subleader. I think the subleader is the way to go really. Hopefully he could help you against d7. _________________ Just browsing, thank-you.
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Power. Sub-leader. _________________ I'm ripped across the ditch, and settled in the dirt and I'm
Wiggled like a stitch, yet I'm the one who's hurt
Pay attention to your twisted little indiscretions
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Poll is up people! Let's see if we can get a record 4 votes this time eh? _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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I think he should keep to the truth, getting away with the bare minimum to keep everyone happy until he can figure out who is telling the truth and who is lying.
For all we know, no one is telling the truth.
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Gotta be the rebels. D7 are just too scary, so best to placate them and avoid getting too involved with them; the Sub-Leader seems like a nutter, with few allies, so it wouldn't be safe to get involved with him in the long run, so the rebels, at least for the moment, seem like the best bet. :biggrin:
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Wooo! 5 votes, not including me! It's a record!
I am closing the voting now, Placate D7, get closer to the SubLeader won, which was a slight suprise, so I will get working on that.
Not feeling too wonderful just now, so probably finish this tomorrow. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Finally! Sorry for the delay with this chapter. I have re-written it about 5 times now, and I still am not too happy with it.
A cruel twist for our hero! What should he do? Should he speak? Should he tell them a story? The truth? Or hold out and hope?
Let us hear your comments! The very future itself hangs in the balance!!
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*eyes cross* Okay, this is all getting a bit complicated. So now we have Dept. 7, Dept. 8, Grimm, the Rebels, Leader, Sub-Leader and Deputy Sub-Leader. All of them want something from him and none of them are prepared to share much info with him.
Given the complexity of everything else, I'd say that this is a test. Keep quiet and prove your loyalty to whichever side is testing you. Then you can get on with your dozen or so conflicting missions after that
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Chapter 12 is back up again (above) folks. I made some smaller changes than I was going to. I simply can't get the chapter to a state I am happy with but I am rather pressed for time, so it will have to do.
Comments please. Pretty please! _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Quote: | A totally anonymous type of person Gallows though. |
Should be thought. And as for how to get out of this - he could always try to bluff his way out.
Say he believed he had discovered a rebel base/hideout, and was attempting to infiltrate the group in order to learn their alligence and their secrets. He could even go so far as to betray the rebels here, and tell them about their plans to assassinate the Leader.
Pretty much - tell the truth, but with a spin on it so it seems that you were doing it all for the Leader's best interests. _________________ Punishment leads to Fear. Fear leads to Obedience. Obedience leads to Freedom. Therefore, Punishment leads to Freedom.
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hmmm..
Quote: | So far he hadn't said anything, waiting for the help he was sure would come.
He didn't wait for Gallows to correct his mistake, |
Why would Gallows expect him to wait for a correction if he hasn't said anything?
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For all we know it could be the rebels who have captured us - afterall, they have just told us all their plans and will probably be feeling nervous. Telling all your plans to someone with our job is going to make anyone nervous.
Plead ignorance and terror - say we've been told to spy on everyone by various sub-leaders but so far we've seen nothing and don't know what we're looking for. Demand to know on what authority you're being held - maybe you'll get some idea who they are. Also, mention the sub-leader's name, alot. If he wants us to spy for him then he's going to have to offer some protection.
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Smee wrote: | ]Why would Gallows expect him to wait for a correction if he hasn't said anything? |
Mmm, maybe that came out wrong.
Quote: | do you know how much information I could find on Department 6?” He didn't wait for Gallows to correct his mistake, but went on. |
I meant the mistake about him saying deparment 6, not 7. Looking at it now it doesn't really make much sense. Time for an edit perhaps. Again. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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In my original* version Charles was from Department 8, which was the Leader's Secret Service. However, I wasn't really happy with that one when I posted it, and thinking about it overnight I decided to change it, along with some other things. In the end I didn't very change much, but Department 8 is one thing I did do.
*The original posted one anyway, which was about the 5th version I wrote. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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Twistyness! This is getting rather mental...
I think that he should look Piggy in the eye, open his mouth as if to speak and then gob a big fat green blob into his beady little eye. He'll get beat up, but he won't betray anyone and he needs to stall for time so the sub-leader, or rebels, or department 7 can do something about his predicament.
*holds breath* _________________ "Humankind cannot stand too much reality" - T.S. Elliot
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Polls up then. Let the voting commence.
Second option should read 'Plead' not 'Please'. _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
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We're a decisive bunch as per usual _________________ The path of my life is strewn with cowpats from the Devil's own Satanic Herd!
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Im stumped. Voted for keep quiet. _________________ Just browsing, thank-you.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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Keep quiet won, so I will get working on this one.
In the meatime, don't forget to vote for this SGame in SGotM!! _________________ Neil Hartley Books.
My Amazon page.
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Solomon Birch Honored Citizen
Joined: 22 Nov 2005 Topics: 18 Posts: 1562 Location: England..... but Japan beckons..... Items Legends
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 4:02 am Post subject: |
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Looking forward to reading the new chapter China! Things are getting more and more dodgy, and I think things are going to kick off real soon.
*holds breath* _________________ "Humankind cannot stand too much reality" - T.S. Elliot
Thesopholis - A Noir Sci-Fi Story - Chapter 8 is up! Read it here
The End of the Voyage - Chapter 9
Shady the Furry Goblin! [Demon's, Satan and Slobadan Milosevic!] - Chapter 3
The Quest for the Legendary Rubber-Duckie! - Chapter 3
One Last Bullet.... Chapter 3
Green Eyes - Chapter 5
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Here's my response Pigface... |
'm saying nothing. Stoic silence. |
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Please ignorance and terror, name drop lots though. |
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Tell the truth, with bias on loyalty! |
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Lob one in Piggy's eye and take the beating like a man. |
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Who Voted: Chinaren, CunningFox, LordoftheNight, Shady Stoat, Smee |
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