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 Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 6:30 am Post subject: Chapter 10 - Escape to the mainland. |
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What has happened before:
You, Thadius LaFontania, found out that your friends had been destroyed by rebles of the Rathiel. After a brief fight between you and the rebles, the result is that you figured out how to use the transoformation stone and the rebles became statues. However, the rest of the Rathiel don't appreciate their kith and kin becoming stone...
You have to find a way off the island. That might be hard, since the Rathiel can transform into anything at will. You could sneak onto one of their boats as an insect...
You are jolted out of your toughts by the smell of smoke. The hut is burning! They're going to smoke you out! Then you remember the stone...They're going to get more than they bargianed for.
You direct your magic into the stone and think Dragon again, but this time one of the dragons of old, the powerful in both magic and body, the king dragons.
Your body explodes outwards as it changes into a scaly, winged replica of itself. The burning hut is soon too small for you.
The Seer Rathiel gape in amazment at your new body. They realize that this is a whole other game, now. You have to get off the island, or die trying. They must prevent you so that they may take vengance. The odds are in your favor now of you prevailing.
But even though they clearly see this, they still think that they can win. They all charge one spell each, and meld into a shining, powerful magican, capable of doing powerful spells, some of them powerful enough to hurt you in the dragon's body.
This might take longer than you orginally thought.
The magician hurls a huge spell upwards into the sky. This is acceptable, it's his way of changing the arena, his turn, and then it will be yours. Then the fight starts.
The magican's spell turns the clear day into a lightning storm, complete with all sorts of precipitation.
You hurl one at the ground around you, making sure that it looks like nothing until it hits.
The entire arena for your fight turns into an active volcanoe's inner sanctum of lava. The lava won't hurt you or him, unless you push him in, it's for show. Just to let him know how powerful you are.
He throws a spell that shakes the sides of the volcanoe until large chunks of the wall fall off. You dodge them and draw upon the lava's strength to add to your own. Then you blast him with flames.
He, too, dodges them, and lands on a part of the arena that's weaker than the rest. Small cracks appear in the ground, but he takes no note. He then conjures swords to hurl at you, and again you are forced to dodge. Slowly, you inch closer to him as you dodge.
You bring down a metor out of the lightning storm and in destroys part of the wall. Huge chunks put the magican on his own island in the lava. This scares him a bit. Then he composes himself and calls upon the lightning storm to begin striking the arena.
The first bolt misses everything. The second one is better, it actually hits the side of the volcanoe. You'll have to wrap this up quickly.
While he was throwing the spell, you snuck up on him, and now you hurl a spell of transoformation at him. He looks suprised even in the statue form. Instantly, the storm vanishes.
You let your spell lasp into nothing too. The arena becomes normal.
The Rathiel are surrounding you. You have no more wish to kill them, so you merely spread your wings and head towards the mainland.
When you get there, you transform into your regular self. Then you break down and cry for everything you did and everything that happenened on that island. You came out of it with the powers of transformation, but you lost things that might never be replaced.
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| Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 12:05 pm Post subject: |
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Like it so far, even though I have been away from the computer for a month now. What's to happen next??? Is he going to look for someone that can help him?? Or is there a way he can free his friends from the ruby's center??
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| Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 8:22 am Post subject: Re: Chapter 10 - Escape to the mainland. |
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| what about him being found by some mages that take him to a prison on a island where magic is useless then he gets out somehow but is hit by a spell ward on the way out but it just makes him fall in the water and hes knocked out and then he wakes up where the mages test is going to happen. :twisted:
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| Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:32 am Post subject: Re: Chapter 10 - Escape to the mainland. |
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| Idea master wrote: | What has happened before:
You, Thadius LaFontania, found out that your friends had been destroyed by rebles of the Rathiel. After a brief fight between you and the rebles, the result is that you figured out how to use the transoformation stone and the rebles became statues. However, the rest of the Rathiel don't appreciate their kith and kin becoming stone...
You have to find a way off the island. That might be hard, since the Rathiel can transform into anything at will. You could sneak onto one of their boats as an insect...
You are jolted out of your toughts by the smell of smoke. The hut is burning! They're going to smoke you out! Then you remember the stone...They're going to get more than they bargianed for.
You direct your magic into the stone and think Dragon again, but this time one of the dragons of old, the powerful in both magic and body, the king dragons.
Your body explodes outwards as it changes into a scaly, winged replica of itself. The burning hut is soon too small for you.
The Seer Rathiel gape in amazment at your new body. They realize that this is a whole other game, now. You have to get off the island, or die trying. They must prevent you so that they may take vengance. The odds are in your favor now of you prevailing.
But even though they clearly see this, they still think that they can win. They all charge one spell each, and meld into a shining, powerful magican, capable of doing powerful spells, some of them powerful enough to hurt you in the dragon's body.
This might take longer than you orginally thought.
The magician hurls a huge spell upwards into the sky. This is acceptable, it's his way of changing the arena, his turn, and then it will be yours. Then the fight starts.
The magican's spell turns the clear day into a lightning storm, complete with all sorts of precipitation.
You hurl one at the ground around you, making sure that it looks like nothing until it hits.
The entire arena for your fight turns into an active volcanoe's inner sanctum of lava. The lava won't hurt you or him, unless you push him in, it's for show. Just to let him know how powerful you are.
He throws a spell that shakes the sides of the volcanoe until large chunks of the wall fall off. You dodge them and draw upon the lava's strength to add to your own. Then you blast him with flames.
He, too, dodges them, and lands on a part of the arena that's weaker than the rest. Small cracks appear in the ground, but he takes no note. He then conjures swords to hurl at you, and again you are forced to dodge. Slowly, you inch closer to him as you dodge.
You bring down a metor out of the lightning storm and in destroys part of the wall. Huge chunks put the magican on his own island in the lava. This scares him a bit. Then he composes himself and calls upon the lightning storm to begin striking the arena.
The first bolt misses everything. The second one is better, it actually hits the side of the volcanoe. You'll have to wrap this up quickly.
While he was throwing the spell, you snuck up on him, and now you hurl a spell of transoformation at him. He looks suprised even in the statue form. Instantly, the storm vanishes.
You let your spell lasp into nothing too. The arena becomes normal.
The Rathiel are surrounding you. You have no more wish to kill them, so you merely spread your wings and head towards the mainland.
When you get there, you transform into your regular self. Then you break down and cry for everything you did and everything that happenened on that island. You came out of it with the powers of transformation, but you lost things that might never be replaced. |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 4:50 am Post subject: |
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Guest!!!! What are you doing!!!! Why did you quote something, and then not put a comment????
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| Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 5:32 am Post subject: |
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| hey idea master...good so far.So what's to happen next?well hopefully it has more action. :twisted: :twisted: well see yall later.
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| Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 4:45 am Post subject: Nice!!! |
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| wow, this storie is very, very good, i like the plot, characters, i can't wait to see what you do next, keep going the same good writing = )
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| Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 4:50 am Post subject: |
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Idea master, looks like all of us readers are hoping for the next chapter soon. 
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| Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 8:59 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, I want to see what is going to beof his friends, how many machines he gets, may be this is not an ordynary storie and evil wins, i dunno...a bit impacient 
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| Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2004 4:10 pm Post subject: |
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| what was lost in a pust of air...
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| Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2004 3:37 am Post subject: |
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| dück wrote: | | what was lost in a pust of air... |
What's "pust"? I am sure you meant "dust".
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| Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:52 am Post subject: |
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Hey idea master,
just checking up on the story.Still dont have any ideas yet.but will give them when i can.i agree wwwith ravenwing on the fact that us readers want to get to the next chapter...ttyl. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :twisted:
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Good luck on your coming chapter! We all can't wait to see what happens next.
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| Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 6:12 am Post subject: |
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Thanks all. I've been quite busy, I'm doing a million things in no time flat. Needless to say, my brain needed a break. So now, I've finally come up with the next chapter. Thank you all for your support in this, it really helps my self-esteem. Let me just say it's been low as of late. I welcome ideas from you, though my name says otherwise.
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