City of IF

Lebrenth · Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 1490 Location: Utah

Poll's up!

And I'd like to let everyone know that I'm going to start "Part Three" in its own subsection next chapter (and maybe I'll finally get the chapter summaries caught up!)

Solomon Birch · Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:56 am Post subject:

Voted! Looking forward to part three Lebby! :D

*holds breath* :shock:

LordoftheNight · Joined: 11 Aug 2005 Posts: 5285 Location: Hell

Voted for, by no means the most sensible option, but the one that seems more realistic.

mr_moochie · Guest

Voted. Good chap. Looking forward to the next one.

dragon_fire372 · Guest Joined: 24 Oct 2005 Posts: 258 Location: Montana

It seems practical to me to send most everyone back, but have the stealthiest few track him without engaging. After all, you don't want to lose track of him, but you can't just charge into enemy territory.

I sort of squeezed my vote into the last option, hoping it fit enough in with the above idea. Waiting for part 3!

Lebrenth · Guest Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 1490 Location: Utah

END OF PART TWO

Part Three is up. Please leave feedback before proceeding by voting below.

Ingrothechundyer · Guest

Out of curosity did you put up a new poll or just rename the poll options?

Solomon Birch · Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 3:58 am Post subject:

Really good stuff Lebby, and I love the changed perspective. Keeps it fresh and interesting.

Keep it up! :biggrin:

Lebrenth · Guest Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 1490 Location: Utah

Ingrothechundyer wrote: Out of curosity did you put up a new poll or just rename the poll options?

Should have known better! The poll has now been deleted and reposted as it should have been! Thanks Ingro!

My apologies to anyone who voted on that last poll. Please vote again! Your feedback is greatly appreciated!

Ingrothechundyer · Guest

Thanks Lebrenth :D

Shady Stoat · Guest Joined: 02 Oct 2005 Posts: 2950 Location: England

I hate voting for the politically correct option. So here's the judgement call to go with it.

I think your writing is pretty spot-on so far, Lebby. Every decision point leads to a major event of one sort or another. Even though the story has only covered a few days so far, there has been a wealth of detail and a great plot that's advanced with major consequences at times.

We've seen action, we've seen riddles, we've seen quick thinking and character building. This story has the lot. Well done so far :D

Solomon Birch · Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 11:22 am Post subject:

Hahaha! Good one Shady, but I have to agree. The writing is well paced, the characters interesting and deep. The settings and detail are vivid and atmospheric. And the decision points are clever, give the reader a good angle to vote from, and the outcomes are always fun and surprising. Taggert's death was really a shock, and very well done. Really quite *sob* emotional... ;)

Keep it up! :biggrin:

LordoftheNight · Guest Joined: 11 Aug 2005 Posts: 5285 Location: Hell

I only have one trouble, and that is the poll below - there aren't enough options, so I was forced to go with just tight, as anything else would have been wrong.

And reading through that made no sense what-so-ever. My apologies.

Lebrenth · Guest Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 1490 Location: Utah

I'm thrilled that I've corralled you into making a positive vote, Lordy, but please tell me what you would have voted if the option was available.

Thank you for your kind remarks everyone :)! Makes me feel all warm inside.

LordoftheNight · Guest Joined: 11 Aug 2005 Posts: 5285 Location: Hell

I don't know - I was really just complaining for the sake of it.

In all honesty it hasn't gone too fast or too slowly, except for the times you disappeared that is.