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Shady Stoat



Joined: 02 Oct 2005
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:02 am    Post subject:  

Good tale Lordy :D

Interesting take on the 'descent into madness' as well. I like it!
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Solomon Birch



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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:10 am    Post subject:  

Woo :shock: , killing! Good entry Lordy.
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ethereal_fauna



Joined: 16 Feb 2005
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:22 am    Post subject:  

OOooh, another to nit-pick :D . Good entry,

Lordy wrote: The Holy Grail. Le Saint Graal. Il Santo Grail. Der Heilige Gral. Known through-out the civilised world this sacred artefact has been the talk of men for centuries.

Entry the First
Today I set off for Castle Corenic, near the town of Llangollen. The Grail Castle is now deserted, but I believe I may discover the whereabouts of the Grail by searching through the empty corridors and hidden passages ways all castles are warrant to hold. I shall leave my servants and esquires in Alnwick Castle, to prepare to sent word of my success when I return.

Entry the Third
We should arrive within two days, any other misfortune forewidth.

Entry the Four

Entry the Fifth
Today a horrible sight met our eyes. We came abreast of a hill, and saw before us the bodies of three peasants crucified upside down before us. (omit, redundant)

Entry the Tenth
He had been eviscerated by a being of incredible force, his chest bared open. And…his heart…removed. In panic I fled from the room in panic (omit, redundant), David close on my heels.

Entry the Eleventh
This is the first chance I’ve had to write done my thoughts, and it is fitting that it is under an image of God.
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LordoftheNight



Joined: 11 Aug 2005
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 12:21 pm    Post subject:  

Thanks Fauna - you really can tell where I left off halfway through a sentace and then repeated words
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Kalanna Rai



Joined: 21 Jan 2006
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Location: The Frozen North

Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:53 pm    Post subject:  

Hoofprints is the correct spelling fauna, checked it out in an online dictonary...all the others were good catches though and I've fixed em'...
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sparta12



Joined: 24 Jan 2005
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:46 pm    Post subject:  

Has anyone seen Sax lately?
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Chinaren



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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:27 am    Post subject:  

Nice entry Lordo!
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ethereal_fauna



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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:31 am    Post subject:  

sparta12 wrote: Has anyone seen Sax lately?
Nope, not recently. Probably a bad case of the RLs has gotten him down.
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LordoftheNight



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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 3:43 pm    Post subject:  

Don't you just hate those?
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Jack_D.Mented



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Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 10:40 am    Post subject:  

Poll time is here! Everybody ready?
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OmegaTerra



Joined: 14 Feb 2006
Posts: 120

Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:49 am    Post subject:  

I voted for my Fauna, because she thwacks me for not doing what she wants. :? Like I'm some kind of Apedog! :cry2:
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ethereal_fauna



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Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:52 am    Post subject:  

Sounds kinda kinky to me :cool:
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Chinaren



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Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 4:03 pm    Post subject:  

Quote: Like I'm some kind of Apedog!

LOL! :lol:
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Kalanna Rai



Joined: 21 Jan 2006
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Location: The Frozen North

Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:28 am    Post subject:  

Gee that's what you get for making her your pet Omega...
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OmegaTerra



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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 10:42 am    Post subject:  

;)
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ethereal_fauna



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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:46 pm    Post subject:  

One more day of polling...so people need to get their votes in quick.
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LordoftheNight



Joined: 11 Aug 2005
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 5:48 pm    Post subject:  

Or leave it like that, which would be the best outcome for you.

There do seem to be less voters this month though...
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Chinaren



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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 5:54 pm    Post subject:  

I don't think it will swing so much at the last minute. But then again, I have been wrong* before.


*Once, back in '87.
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LordoftheNight



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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:11 pm    Post subject:  

I hope that was nothing to do with my birthday - a Darth Vader experience is not what I'm looking for.
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Jack_D.Mented



Joined: 22 Jan 2006
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:50 am    Post subject:  

Looks like we have a winner!

Congrats to Fauna and her stellar story, "The Unfortunate Defenestration of Jacob's Crystallized Faith."
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Smee



Joined: 16 Oct 2004
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:26 am    Post subject:  

:D Well done
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Solomon Birch



Joined: 22 Nov 2005
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Location: England..... but Japan beckons.....

Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:50 am    Post subject:  

Congratulations Fauna, great story! :biggrin:
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Shady Stoat



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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 1:14 pm    Post subject:  

Well done Fawna :D
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LordoftheNight



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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 2:48 pm    Post subject:  

Yes, yes congradulations Flauna.


*mumblers*making me lose my 100% record*mumbles*
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OmegaTerra



Joined: 14 Feb 2006
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 3:44 pm    Post subject:  

Congratulations pet

Yet another time-consuming ordeal for me SHMILY :cool:
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Chinaren



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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 3:53 pm    Post subject:  

Indeed, a clear win!! :D
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ethereal_fauna



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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:31 pm    Post subject:  

Thanks everyone :D

I'll get a new comp in the works in the next day or two.
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