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Solomon Birch



Joined: 22 Nov 2005
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Location: England..... but Japan beckons.....

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 12:23 am    Post subject:  

Offer to bear him a child. Cos I'm messed up like that... ;)
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The Meaning Of Fear



Joined: 06 May 2006
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Location: In a deep, dark corner of the universe, plotting.

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 12:30 am    Post subject:  

WOOT! FINALLY SOMEONE WHO IS MESSED UP! YAY!

Hey soily, you wanna join the messed up gang?
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Shady Stoat



Joined: 02 Oct 2005
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Location: England

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 12:54 am    Post subject:  

I'm not over-fond of any of the offers, to tell you the truth. Personally, if I was a cynical weaselly woman like Brenda (not that I could ever be like that, of course! :shock:), I'd want to stall the Devil while I worked out what I could find out on my own.

I mean, I wouldn't reject the offer outright, because the Dark Lord might very well be telling the truth when he says he's her only route to her brother. But accepting an offer on the spot, without looking at the full spectrum of opportunities? That's just dumb - and, whatever else she may be, Brenda isn't dumb.

If she has to reject him, do so. He won't be gone for long, in any case. The Devil doesn't give up so easily. A show of strength may very well force a better offer from him when he returns, anyway :D
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The Powers That Be



Joined: 19 May 2005
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Location: Santa Monica, CA

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 7:56 pm    Post subject:  

I'm not loving this whole idea of the negotiation. I just have a hard time envisioning Satan haggling over details of how much is enough. I don't think it serves the story particularly well, either - makes Satan seem petty. Maybe it's just me, though.

Which means, I guess, that I'm voting for the forking.
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Ravenwing



Joined: 18 May 2004
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Location: Virginia

Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:54 am    Post subject:  

But even telling the guy to fuck off shows a sign of strength. Like you said, the Devil doesn't give up that easily. Besides I am sure he will be back. :D
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Ravagerrr
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Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:27 am    Post subject:  

One more day to vote, then both polls should play into the next chapter!
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