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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:26 am Post subject: |
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| WEEEE!!!! good chapter there fenris I fo hope to see more. I say that he had enough of being beaten. ;) |
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:03 pm Post subject: |
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chinaren wrote: Quote: If you have, seek some new friends,
Ha! Great line!
Great chapter infact Fenris! Liked it a lot. :grin: A few areas could do with a little touching up, but generally very good.
I was reading it over and grimaced a lot. lol. Thanks nightshade and Lilith. Well...the DP is whatever you want it to be, but mainly how the hell is Michael supposed to get out of this situation? |
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joyfull22
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| Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:30 pm Post subject: |
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Great chapter Fenris!
For the DP, I suggest that Michael should keep on telling the truth and use his torn off arm as evidence. If that fails, he should probably just bear all the pain. The interrigators wouldn't kill him, would they? |
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| Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:11 pm Post subject: |
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The demon reattached his arm, remember?
Just keep with it until they knock him unconscious, hopefully they won't kill him.
Try another story.
Hard DP here :D |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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| I'm back! And unfortunately, no one has responded from the time I've been gone. Any ideas people? |
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Crunchyfrog
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| Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:17 am Post subject: |
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His arm may have been reattached, but there is nothing in the chapter to say whether it has any use yet. That could still be evidence.
Maybe a clue could be in the way it has been reattached...
I can't think of anything more at the moment... :? |
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