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Key



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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:31 pm    Post subject: The Archer's Quest Chapter 9: Dragon in the Garden  

The next chapter of the featured storygame "The Archer's Quest" has been posted:

Chapter 9: Dragon in the Garden

Posting and voting is complete for Chapter 9.

This is the latest story in the Wheel saga, and a sequel to the novella "The Archer's Flight". Welcome to Wheel fans and to newcomers! A new chapter will be posted every Sunday night.

For more about the storygame, see the New Players Start Here topic in this forum.
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The White Blacksmith



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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 8:38 am    Post subject:  

I think that she should try to persuade the Children of the Serpent to teach her as much as they can about who she is, but then restock her and let her o on her way, to seek out the other Makers. It's about time we got some of these stories together!
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scissorkitty



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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:45 am    Post subject:  

I like the idea of Deica seeking out the other eleven Makers, as well. She still needs to keep up a strong, brave front for the Dragon... so I think maybe she should request to meet the other Sisters, and reserve her decision to help or leave till then.
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D-Lotus



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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:29 pm    Post subject:  

I agree. Demand to be seen by the Eldest sister, the one in real command.

As for the story, I was enjoying it more when she was traveling. I really liked the description of the terrain and stuff. I'd like to see her traveling again- as others have suggested, maybe she can search for the other makers.
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Key



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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 6:54 pm    Post subject:  

OK, good thoughts everyone. Let me make sure I've got suggestions for Deica's immediate action:

- Tell Alcyone that you want to travel and find the other Makers
- Ask to meet the other Sisters
- Demand to meet the Sister who's in command

Anything else? One more day...

:-)
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Traveller



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Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:27 pm    Post subject:  

I'm going to say I would like to meet the other sisters...I think a council of dragons would be cool!!!! From there she can be sent to find the other makers to unite them in this battle...for one side or the other...great job...really enjoying it
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Key



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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 10:41 pm    Post subject:  

Poll's up. Vote away!

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Key



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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 7:50 pm    Post subject:  

Looking for some more votes. One more day...
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Wolf_Jester
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:45 pm    Post subject:  

I think Deica should ask the Dragon to disclose some of what it knows, so that she will know whether or not she's being lied to. Also, she should try to ascertan if the dragon was somehow different when she knew her as a child. That way she could judge if she joins the forces of chaos, whether or not she will become as evil as they are. :grin:
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 6:32 pm    Post subject:  

Good suggestion, Wolf Jester, but we're on voting now...currently a tie, looking for a tiebreaker...
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 8:49 pm    Post subject:  

Thanks, everybody. Poll's closed, new chapter up on Sunday.
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