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Angeal PureHeart
Joined: 15 May 2011
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:16 pm Post subject: |
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I know.... It's been awhile... Sorry!!! >.<
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Writing a Song
If I knew how to write a song
I’d write one everyday
It would say that I’m in love with you
And why I feel this way
It would have to say you’re pretty
And as rare as a desert rose
It would say you’re a looker
From your head down to your toes
You are funny, dainty, fragile
And as feminine as can be
You’re smart charming lovely
And everything to me
You’re my comfort when I’m lonely
You’re my peace when I need rest
Of all the women I’ve known
I must rate you the best.
You’re the orchard in the jungle,
you’re the better half of me
You’re all of this and so much more,
you mean the world to me
Still so much is left unsaid,
It would take me far to long
I know how much I love you,
If only I could write a song.
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I know... Mushy... But I have new inspiration! |
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Thunderbird
Joined: 13 Sep 2009
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Location: Rising from the ashes
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| Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 8:54 pm Post subject: |
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| Ah, Angeal, your words mean so much. Sometimes, its nice to know someone can voice you when you can't voice yourself. ;) |
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Angeal PureHeart
Joined: 15 May 2011
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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| *Sigh* I need to get more people commenting.. Otherwise it just seems pointless to put my poems up here... |
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HalfEmptyHero
Joined: 16 Feb 2009
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Location: Where rolls the Oregon, and hears no sound
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| Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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Angeal PureHeart wrote: *Sigh* I need to get more people commenting.. Otherwise it just seems pointless to put my poems up here...
Forgive me for sounding rude, but if that is why you write then perhaps it is time to put down the pen. |
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Angeal PureHeart
Joined: 15 May 2011
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:29 am Post subject: |
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Well... I know it's been a long time... So I wrote this little diddy. It is really short so I will get working on the next one right away!
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Roses
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
He's for me,
and not for you.
So if by chance,
you take my place.
I'll take my fist,
and smash your face.
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Kinda funny and I laughed my butt off after I wrote it :p |
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Angeal PureHeart
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:44 am Post subject: |
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| No replies? Aww come on guys :p |
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Thunderbird
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Location: Rising from the ashes
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:21 pm Post subject: |
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*shrugs*
I liked it... but then my sense of humor is twisted just like that! :) |
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Angeal PureHeart
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:36 pm Post subject: |
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Well. It has been awhile so I will post THREE just for you guys!
Your touch
Your touch is with me always,
It’s burnt into my skin,
As soft and warm as sun rays
When a summer day sets in.
Your soft voice never silent,
It’s forever in my ears,
Serenading every moment
And calming all my fears.
Your arms always enfold me,
The strength of angels wings,
They support and protect me wholly
With the safety a true love brings.
Day Dream
Whenever I day dream,
and day dream I do,
in my secret garden,
I day dream of you.
I day dream of you,
in a faraway land;
embracing me tight
and holding my hand.
Holding my hand,
and touching my face.
Just you and me,
in this peaceful place.
In this peaceful place
a pristine river flows.
Where the unicorns run,
a breeze always blows.
A breeze always blows
and sings of a song;
our love in a place
where you're never gone.
Where you're never gone
is as it would seem,
from dusk until dawn,
whenever I day dream.
And whenever I day dream,
and day dream I do,
in my secret garden,
I day dream of you.
What you guys think of that one eh?
Dream Come True
Feelings that once were hidden
Are now expressed to you.
Days that once were stormy
Are now the brightest blue.
Times that once were lonely
Are now filled with pleasure.
All that once was mine alone
Are now things we both treasure.
Nights that once were cold
Are now comforting and warm.
Fears that once were very real
Are now gone with the storm.
A heart that once was broken
Can now finally mend.
A person once alone in life
Can now call you a friend.
Dreams that once were longed for
Are now all coming true.
The love I once thought was gone
I have now and forever in you.
OK there is all three^_^ Let me know! |
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Angeal PureHeart
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 11:15 am Post subject: |
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| Not to be mean BBS but... That did not make any sence to me T^T |
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Angeal PureHeart
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:03 am Post subject: |
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| Sorry fort not postin recently! I sorta lost my muse for it but now I am back! I am getting to writing once more with Justin (my boyfriend) as my new muse! |
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Angeal PureHeart
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Location: Escanaba, MI 49829
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:49 pm Post subject: |
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What Is Left Behind
The Sweet September Rain
Chased Away The Sun
Darkened Up My Skies
As Sorrow Sweetly Hung
Echoes Of Thunder
Embarked Upon My Ears
Screams From The Storm
Tormentingly I Hear
September Suffers
a Curse Of Much Disaster
Its The Perfect Month
Heartache's Surely After
The Sun Will Never Be As Bright
Smiles Will Never Stay
When We Remember
What Katrina's Took Away
Innocent Lives
Burried Under Rain
The Most Violent And Horrible
Vicious Hurricane
Sweet September
The Month Of Much Demise
The Month We Find Reason
To Over-Flow With Cries
Sweet September
The Heart Of All Our Cries
Simplicity Suffers
As Heartache Over-Rides
What do you guys think? Been awhile but I got my sprak back! |
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BStheGreat
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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Angeal PureHeart wrote:
Innocent Lives
Berried Under Rain
Interesting to think about, but somehow I doubt what you were going for. |
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