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Galaxy Raven 9 - New chapter up soon! Catch up now to win!!! Goto page 1, 2  Next   (currently a favorite of )    Storygames Home -> -> The Vault View previous topic :: View next topic   Author Masterweaver Honored Citizen Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Posts: 1463 Location: Look around Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:48 pm    Post subject: Galaxy Raven 9 - New chapter up soon! Catch up now to win!!! By popular request, it is now time to view the antics of the crew of IF’s first extra-solar starship!!!! --- --- Episode:Derivatives Chapter One --- Chief Engineer Cyberworm scurried down the corridors of the Galaxy Raven 9, absentmindedly greeting the tramp in the S.T.O.R.M. model garbage bin, and finally managed to find a spare turbolift. Tapping in the number-code for the bridge, he whirred his eyepiece at a small crack. That would have to be repaired… The doors wooshed open, and his robolegs carried him into the expansive room, one wall of which was a flat screen television and the other wall of which was lined with control panels. “The com-channels are out of alignment, captain. It’ll take about three hours to get them up again.” Captain Nene Vergirl threw up her hands. She was wearing a yellow bodysuit with an uncounted amount of pockets, black boots, and a very annoyed expression. Her voluptuous body barely fit into her clothing. “Great. Perfect. How many more problems will we have before we leave dock?” First Mate Rune, a man in a pink suit, turned to the captain quietly. “There is nothing to worry about. I am sure all of our problems will be dealt with before we leave the station.” NeNe locked gazes with the man. She had been informed of his special capabilities, and most certainly did not want them used on him. “I’m sure,” she snapped, before stalking off to the turbolift with an escort of male eyes. Cyberworm glanced at Rune. “Bit touchy, isn’t she?” --- Inside the turbolift, the captain shook her long hair. The nerve of that man, trying to manipulate her mind! How dare he! “Excuse me, you’re in my space.” NeNe looked at the tramp in the S.T.O.R.M. “Sorry.” She moved a bit to the side. Light music played. NeNe glanced at the woman. “Sooo… You do know we’ll be leaving dock soon, right?” “No.” “Um… Well, we will.” The Tramp was silent. She began prodding her fingernails in search of any dirt. NeNe had heard she was a bit of a clean freak, but this... The doors finally wooshed open. “NeNe! How nice of you to come down!” A tall pale man in a black cloak smiled a fanged smile at the captain. She returned with a half-grin. “Aren’t you supposed to be counseling somebody, Meph?” The man chuckled. “Nope, nothing on the schedule. What say I vink your blahd?” “How about we just share a champagne?” “Meh, I’m full anyways. And I wanted to talk to you about something.” The man held out a winglike arm, which NeNe took. Ah well, this was worth that weird first mate. Side by side, they strode to 1701 Forward. The tramp looked after them contemplatively. She remembered those days, the innocence of youth... The doors whooshed shut. <<< Credit to Brian Hudson for Cyberworm pic. DP: What’s Meph want to chat about? Also, bid to write the next chapter. Last edited by Masterweaver on Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:54 pm; edited 1 time in total Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:07 pm    Post subject: Cy here! We've got no problems down here cap'n! She's up and running at full capacity! As for Meph, I'm not sure what he wants to talk about. Great start nevertheless! _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Last edited by Cyberworm on Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:57 am; edited 2 times in total Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 7:11 pm    Post subject: hmm, knowing meph the way that i do, i am fairly certain that he wants to chat about something that he is always known to be chatting about. He wants to talk to her about.......her disturbed feelings that she has felt ever since killing the previous first mate! She feels that she may be losing touch with her inner strength, because she shouldn't feel bad at all for killing the slimy, old, touchy-feely guy. Good start MW. I was slightly concerned, but... I feel a little better now. _________________ Cause I am, whatever you say I am If I wasn't, then why would I say I am? I don't know, it's just the way I am. eminem without the threat of death, there is no reason to live at all marilyn manson Back to top Author Guest Items Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 7:38 pm    Post subject: I like it, but it's a bit short isn't it? Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:16 pm    Post subject: Hey MW, very well thought out if not a bit rushed. why dont we try and flesh it out a bit? I will bid 25 fables to do a bit of a rewrite/expand on the first chapter and carry on from the DP... As for Meph? He is a devious man and he better keep his hands to himself or he will be swimming with the comets same as the last first-mate... AS for Rune? Im on to you boy! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Masterweaver Honored Citizen Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Posts: 1463 Location: Look around Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:13 am    Post subject: So far for the dp we have "First Mate's a real Ashinti" and "Let's Vamp, love!" We also have a bid for 25 from mon capiton for the next chapter. Anybody else? Also, I hereby instate the perogitive that each episod lasts five chapters. Thus, five writers an episode, and NO repeat writers. That's right, I won't be back for a while! Back to top Author sixtailedpork Guest Items Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:09 am    Post subject: ............ Oh shit. I just posted something fairly similar to this. Uh... *hides behind table/wall*. Well a fairly similar 'gist' that is. Except its a starship headed out of the universe per se. Anyways.... looks good. Pas mal (means not bad in French). But a little tipsy on the description. Although maybe that's my own craziness???.... Back to top Author Masterweaver Honored Citizen Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Posts: 1463 Location: Look around Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 5:48 pm    Post subject: We still got the First Mate and I Love You as messy's chat options. ANY suggestions and or bids for the next chap? Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:58 am    Post subject: Maybe Messy says something like "remember those guys from planet X? Well, we've had one on our tail this whole time. They use cloaking device so I accidentally discovered it while checking the glitches in the sensor array." Just a thought... _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Masterweaver Honored Citizen Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Posts: 1463 Location: Look around Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:09 pm    Post subject: So, "Vamp it up!" "First Mate Blues" and "They're After Us!" are now ooptions. Anything else? Bids? Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:06 pm    Post subject: He could discuss the mission with her. In a way like "You know we have many greens onboard, why did you accept this foolish mission". Like we are already on a mission and he wants to make sure our captain knows what she is doing. Respect to the captain. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Masterweaver Honored Citizen Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Posts: 1463 Location: Look around Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:56 pm    Post subject: Hey! Poll is up and chappy fleshed! So, now you have TWO options. You can vote, or you can bid to write the next chappy! Current bid: 25 to NeNe. All bids are paied to moi, by the way. I'll handle the salary. Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:13 pm    Post subject: okay i voted you LIKe our mission - i love the green shirts comment made by Cy lol impending doom heralded by green shirts.. _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:19 am    Post subject: Although I didn't mean green shirts when I said "greens" (but greenhorns instead) I like that misunderstanding! Let there be green shirts! _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Lock Guest Items Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 3:03 pm    Post subject: good good good Wow, this is quite good. I like the use of the tense. Your characters are a little muffled, but overall it's a very good story. I look foward to reading the rest of this, indeed. Poor Chinaren, I'm voting for him! Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 3:42 am    Post subject: Nene and Meph sat opposite one another in comfy love seats of soft, plush velvet. The blood red color seemed to heighten the tones of Nene's pale skin, while making Meph look more gray than usual. The comfort of the chairs allowed for better conversations, amongst other things, and Meph was really hoping for a good session with Nene. "So, Captain, how are things going for you this week?" Meph smiled. Smiling was always a good thing to do when trying to get extra bonuses out of you work. "Well, you should bloody well know how are things are going, you talk to me every week! Do you really think that a week makes that much difference in a persons' life?" Nene was in one of her pissy, sarcastic moods, again. "Nene, why do you lash out at me so?" "I just want to be a pain in your butt!" Nene smiled a big grin, and thoughts suddenly sprung into Meph's mind, totally unbidden of course, but very nice to dwell on, later, when he was alone perhaps. "I am just so totally stoked about our new mission. I mean, how often do we get to ride through space, to try to find a planet that no one really knows even exists? This is just so totally cool!" "So you like the fact that we are traveling hundreds of light years away from charted territory in order to ascertain the existence of a planet that someone thinks may exist?" Meph was totally not cool with the mission, mainly because he wondered how long his food supply would last before he had to start feeding on his fellow crew mates. Would they hold great blood drives in order to satiate his thirst, or would he get to tap the fount and dine in a more pleasing manner? "Whatever are you thinking of Meph?" Nene was looking at Meph, a quizzical expression upon her face. "I was wondering if I would have the chance to taste you on this voyage, Nene, that is all." Nene giggled, perhaps because she misunderstood his meaning. "Well, maybe not now, okay Meph? We got other things to focus on." Just then, the emergency lights in Meph's room turned a violent shade of puke green. A voice came over the speaker system. "Captain Nene! Your immediate presence is required on the bridge! We have an emergency here!" Nene looked at Meph. "Could you help me out here?" "Of course Captain." Meph stood, as did Nene. Taking a step towards one another, Meph embraced her, then, they were gone, only to re-appear on the bridge. There were many cat calls and jeering over their sudden arrival. Nene looked fiercely at her crew. "Now is not the time for this! What is the emergency here?" Well, what is the emergency? _________________ Cause I am, whatever you say I am If I wasn't, then why would I say I am? I don't know, it's just the way I am. eminem without the threat of death, there is no reason to live at all marilyn manson Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 8:05 am    Post subject: gReAt! Now... what IS the emergency? Hmmmm... Hostile aliens. Something with tentacles, big eyes, a great appetite for living cells (since their body is deteriorating at a very fast rate). Of course, they have a hidden connection with our ship vampire Messy wich he, of course, denies and wants to be hidden. Whoa. Definetly too much Star Trek and soap operas... _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author algu95 Citizen Joined: 04 Mar 2007 Posts: 265 Location: Trudging around in Allwhere Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 8:23 am    Post subject: Hmmmm hmmmm..... Nice SG there MW... Don't understand why it is getting so many relpies though... Hey, don't look at me like that! I don't mean it's bad, in fact, it's really good. I am only sulking because MY STORYGAME is not getting any attention at all... Apart from that I got Rune to post while talking to him in The Inn. And the DP? Well... Really... Hmmm... The Ship... Hmmm... Well, as the person above stated, an Alien Invader would be welcome now... Only it's a bit too typical. _________________ Yes, no, what, hello? Falcon Lord, a linear story by algu! Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 2:21 am    Post subject: I know, I know. Then let's say they run into a ship whose engines are close to imploding, or exploding or something that will cause massive area damage. Is that more original? _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 5:31 pm    Post subject: firstly i want to see a reference to the crazy amount of expendibly shirted crew kicking around in the next 'episode'. secondly i think it should be a MAJOR disaster like the shuttle that was bringing NeNe's supply of shoes and outfits was attacked by Jimmy Choo, Prada loving gay space pirates! LOL! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Crunchyfrog Honorable IFian Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 3998 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 2:43 am    Post subject: I like the idea of the gay space pirates! How about something goes wrong with the ship - like a wing falling off or something, and the crew draw straws on who's going to do the crazy spacewalk, complete with space suits and jet packs to get it fixed. Oh yeah, and who's going to write the next one? Back to top Author The White Blacksmith Elder Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 2629 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 10:21 am    Post subject: I'll go with Neg's idea, BUT with an added twist. The gay pirates are only a tiny part of a huge pirate operation (led by whoever will become the main villain in this). They send a small ship also to attack the... whatever Neg's ship is called. For whatever reason, they want to stop them reaching this planet. Oh, and in related news, I've found Weaver on smackjeeves. Should I message him? _________________ Tea Cures All. Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 6:32 pm    Post subject: YAY!! wb Mw! okay we need to set a min on the chapters as these are far to short to qualiify as SG! also we should open bidding on being the bad guy .... also just wanted to add that your delightful captain isn't a green newb to this whole space business - lets not make her so 'eager' in the next chapter okay? maybe RUne (in his pink space suit) is really the leader of the gay space pirates? or in a dashing plot twist he could be a straight macho ladies man, mans man, man about town that just happens to have a penchant for pink.... what say you IF Rune? _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:30 am    Post subject: hmm luke skywalker comes to mind for some reason rune and the fees are abolished... pm cy with the details of your character as he is boss... im all for it rune! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:39 am    Post subject: He could be the good guy turned bad... something like Darth Mole, or Mark Soilstrider. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author The White Blacksmith Elder Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 2629 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 10:12 am    Post subject: Or we could have a part of the ship gone wrong. Nothing essensial, but the crew know Neg will be furious, because it's her bedroom or something. _________________ Tea Cures All. Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:35 pm    Post subject: Smithy! Welcome aboard! Soon I am going to write down the writers of the game. Shall i include you? It's going to be a Round Robin, and it's OK if you haven't done that before. Neither have I. The participants should post "Include me!!! Please!!!", and the entries will end in a week. I hope that will be enough time for everyone who wishes to participate. if any of you have any suggestions, please, post them as soon as possible. Thank you. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Last edited by Cyberworm on Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:01 pm; edited 1 time in total Back to top Author Crunchyfrog Honorable IFian Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 3998 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 2:46 am    Post subject: I can't remember if there was a poll. Do I assume the next chapter is going to be Gay Space Pirates? Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:31 am    Post subject: Exactly. Feel free to explore the depths of GR, space... gay space too... gaynivesre! Will you give us a hint about your position in the GR9? Will it even be on the ship? _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Last edited by Cyberworm on Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:32 am; edited 1 time in total Back to top Author Crunchyfrog Honorable IFian Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 3998 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:31 am    Post subject: The comms engineer, resplendent in a bright red shirt with the word "Expendable" emblazoned on his back pointed to the screen. The image on it wobbled, rolled vertically for a few seconds before crackling and going blank. "We nearly got it going that time!" he cried excitedly. Fiddling with the control panel again he managed to bring an image back into view. Nene disengaged herself from the envelope of Meph's cloak and gazed earnestly at the screen. Various ships of the fleet moved gracefully between the docking bays in front of a magnificent backdrop of the shimmering dusty glow of the galaxy's outer limb. "You brought me up here just to tell me you almost got it working?" she snapped. "Er... no..," he replied, blushing as red as his shirt. "Look..." The comms engineer fiddled with the vast panel of controls in front of him, and eventually found the zoom button, and homed in on some twinkling debris near one of the docking bays. A small shuttle floated into view with a huge hole blasted in its side. It was haemorraging its contents - expensive shoes and accessories spun slowly and gracefully in space, interspersed with the occasional Jimmy Choo shopping bag. Meph's eyes watered as he watched a knot of delicate lingerie unfolding in the foreground, amongst garments from the latest brightly coloured Prada collection. "My supply shuttle..." thought Nene, biting her lip. Various whoops and cheers filled the room at the sight, followed by disappointed groans as the visual fizzled out once more. "Like I said, it'll take about 3 hours to fix," reminded Cyberworm. "But I think I found the problem. Looks like our comms have been taken over." "How astute of you, droid," boomed a disembodied voice enigmatically. "Huh?" said Cy, looking round. "Who said that?" "Search me," replied another comms engineer, clad in an identical red shirt as the first, his head buried in an open panel full of wires and flashing lights with the word 'danger' written on them. "AAAGGH!" Rune, Cy, Tramp, Meph and Nene watched detatchedly as the crewman's body was instantly incinerated, turning to a black and crispy mess on the floor. "Dammit, I told him not to touch the blue wire," muttered Cy. "Send in another one!" Within seconds the doors to the bridge swung open with a smart hooosh. A replacement crew member reported for duty, kicking the charred remains of his cohort to one side, and stuck his head in the same hole that fried his predecessor. "Pay attention, will you!?" snapped the voice again. "Really, did you have to ruin my entrance?" "Uh, yeah, you were complimenting my astuteness," said Cy, looking up again. "Pah, this is no good. Okay Quentin, beam me aboard their sorry excuse for a ship..." A bright pink light filled the bridge, and gradually solidified into a being. He - if it was a he, stood some where between six and seven feet tall. Large feet were squeezed impossibly into pink sequined stillettos. Black fishnet stockings held up by frilly pink suspenders covered his knobbly legs, his large hairy torso bursting out of a red and pink basque. Around his shoulders was draped a stole of an animal skin not known to this side of the galaxy, and the immaculate make-up on his face looked a professional job. Nene felt a pang of jealousy. The personal assistant she had assigned to her had such a bad tremor that she could barely stir a cup of coffee let alone apply make-up to the captain's face. To complete the ensemble a traditional pirate captain's hat perched atop a platinum wig, the spangled skull and crossbones emblazoned on the front expressing a lewd wink. "Well, hellooooo, what have we here? A vampire, how divine!" The bizarre being winked at Meph, before spotting Rune's pink suit. "Ooooh, I say, a man after me own heart... " He minced towards him, the stilletto heels wobbling at alarming angles. Rune backed away a few steps, bumping against a control panel as he did so. "Leave my crew alone!" demanded Nene. The platinum wigged head turned and glared at her. "That's no way to speak to a Pirate Queen, my dear. And you would be the oh so lovely Captain Nene Vergirl?" Reluctantly leaving a rather relieved Rune the pink pirate minced across to greet her, holding out his hand in a gesture for her to kiss a huge pink gem set into a ring on his index finger. Nene folded her arms. She needed to regain some control here. "State your identity and your mission," she said flatly. The screen fizzled and flickered on for a moment, and images of Nene's undies floated by. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> DP - What are the Gay Pirate's intentions? <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< (hope that was okay... ) Last edited by Crunchyfrog on Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:43 am; edited 3 times in total Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:48 am    Post subject: Ah, so Rune is the comms officer? Fine, so we must now make some decisions... _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Crunchyfrog Honorable IFian Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 3998 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:53 am    Post subject: Hehe, well I didn't mean for him to be the coms officer but I guess he could be. He was just there. Unfortunately for Rune, the pink has attracted the pirate's fancy. The comms engineers happened to be in red shirts... Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:56 am    Post subject: Indeed, unlucky for Rune. His/her name: Petunia Macy Stiffler. (yes, the initials are PMS lol) Intentions: Wants someone to come over to his/her ship to help her upgrade the engines with some stolen technology. Real intentions: We don't want to know . And he/she doesn't want the chief engineer to come because "she knows that he has much to do on his ship". So he sends someone to do it instead. Any alterations of his intentions are welcome. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:20 am    Post subject: Good job cf. It looks like you had fun with this. So, the pirates want to hold a drag queen fashion show, but they need an audience. so, they are there to hijack the ship and force the members to their own so that they can watch, applaud, get sick, whatever. Back to top Author The White Blacksmith Elder Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 2629 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 11:23 am    Post subject: I F5 Mess-Head _________________ Tea Cures All. Back to top Author Rune Citizen Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 285 Location: Get Lost. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 11:46 am    Post subject: Ok, well I think the pirates are interested in having some 'different flavor' aboard their ship. Sailing the dark sea of space alone on their own ship with the same faces each day gets a little old. They're here to make an offer..trade one of their handsome young lads for a few of our own recruits (probably someone with an 'expendable' label). The surprising twist being that only the emissary (pirate leader) dresses quite as flamboyantly. The rest of the 'happy' pirates actually dress and appear more discrete, if not serious. Think GQ magazine. All supermodel, material. Much encouragement when they show 'their goods' to convince potential targets to accept the trade. :-p Rather enjoyable Hulk. Keep it up guys. _________________ Just another statistic now. I'd always hoped you could be more. Haven't seen you in years. Now, only in my tears- Unseen and restless. People come and go. But hope, they'll never know- that I had for you and have still for those whom we held close. I'll see you in my thoughts and dreams. Try not worry for you- unseen. A child I knew you then- Now amongst the dead spirits of men. Live on little boy. My hopeless joy. I'll hang on if you linger. Rest your spirit with me. One friend down. Goodbye Christian. Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 3:23 pm    Post subject: okay - i like the idea of them being taken aboard the other ship, then taken to an alien planet on some mission the pirates need help with... They need the main crew cause that always happened in Star Trek.. NeNe should be flipping out slightly more over the clothes, maybe go back to her room and have a fit of rage (throwing stuff around and yelling) b4 returning to the main deck and resuming the mission. love your work crunchy though i am going to have to write you in when its my turn (unless some one beats me to it).. Viva la GR9! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 4:35 am    Post subject: Come on fellas, buy the pink bags of voting! _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 4:35 am    Post subject: i vote lets mix the crews up a bit... but i am never going to relinquish captaincy.. _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 12:23 am    Post subject: Ok, the poll is closed now! I'll mix the crews and we'll see what we'll get. I hope we won't get from behind... _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:23 am    Post subject: as long as there is a super hot gay pirate who isnt really gay and can give Ne a bit of a , well um, yes you know *wink wink* i have no problems with that.... _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Rune Citizen Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 285 Location: Get Lost. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:53 am    Post subject: What fun would that be? How about he's one of those pirates who got 'shifted' from a previous situation like this...was straight, has been through multiple cases of sodomy and gets switched back and approached by Ne. Now he's ready and steady and really expecting to relish the opportunity to be with a woman finally...only to find that he can't get himself....elevated, for the occasion. He and Ne must work through his issues-and worse yet, he dreams (rather pleasantly) about his partners back on his old ship. Drama. _________________ Just another statistic now. I'd always hoped you could be more. Haven't seen you in years. Now, only in my tears- Unseen and restless. People come and go. But hope, they'll never know- that I had for you and have still for those whom we held close. I'll see you in my thoughts and dreams. Try not worry for you- unseen. A child I knew you then- Now amongst the dead spirits of men. Live on little boy. My hopeless joy. I'll hang on if you linger. Rest your spirit with me. One friend down. Goodbye Christian. Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:58 am    Post subject: Rune wrote: What fun would that be? How about he's one of those pirates who got 'shifted' from a previous situation like this...was straight, has been through multiple cases of sodomy and gets switched back and approached by Ne. Now he's ready and steady and really expecting to relish the opportunity to be with a woman finally...only to find that he can't get himself....elevated, for the occasion. He and Ne must work through his issues-and worse yet, he dreams (rather pleasantly) about his partners back on his old ship. Drama. Yes he is infatuated with Rune in the pink suit but Rune is currently having it off with the leader of the Gay Space pirates! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:35 am    Post subject: Great, another one of those days... "Honey, I am Petunia Macy Stifler, the Pirate Queen and the most dreadful (and beautiful) captain in the seven galaxies, and if I were you, I'd be more worried about everyone watching my own undies." The captain went furious at the sight of the red silk thongs flying around, and the men drooling at the sight of them, imagining how they would look on her. "Cy! Shut the damn screen off!" "Aye aye cap'n!" he rushed to the control board and pressed 34 buttons before the screen went black. "I'm gonna put a shortcut key on that one day..." "You still haven't told me why you came here... miss." Said Ne, almost furious because she somehow knew that... uhm... she?... was the cause of Ne's "goodies" shipment fall to waste. A waste in the waste of space. "I've been looking for some stuff for this fashion show we hold every year. Can you imagine how it is to look at the same old faces compete and win the competition? We need some change, girl." As she was saying that she casually, almost gracefully put her hand on Rune's shoulder. Poor Rune went from pink to green. "Sorry for wrecking your portable wardrobe, I'll buy you new ones. After all, we simply HAVE to go shopping together, as fellow captains." NeNe had a flux of emotions and thoughts in her head that she feared she will do something in affect. Mephistopheles saw that and jumped in, and saved the Queen from Ne's possible assault campaign. "Well, since you will repay the damage done, and you stated the cause of your arrival, we will have to act by the protocol and first ask you to join us at dinner." He said, stepping backwards as the Queen stepped forward. "Oh, I'll be delighted!" She shouted hysterically, shaking her arms like an easy bimbo. "Let me just return on my ship and have a change of clothes!" The queen has left the ship in a pink fuzz. Cyberworm, who had some knowledge of human complex psychology immediately beamed the ship's medic, Crunchyfrog on the bridge and whispered her an order, although even a laic could see that Ne was going to explode without delay. Since Messy already knew the routine, he pat Ne on the shoulder and her fury caused her to turn around without paying attention. Crunchy ran to her and injected her with a double dose of some sleeping drug. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ne woke up in the guest quarters in her ceremonial suit she wears on important meetings. Messy looked after her the whole time and it looked like the Queen has not yet arrived. She immediately checked her neck, but there were no holes. She looked at her clothes and then at Messy. "How dare you change my clothes without me knowing!" "You fell unconscious, captain." "Again? It's happening a bit too often, maybe I should let the ship medic know about it..." "That wouldn't be necessary. We will worry about that later. Now you have to worry about..." His talking was interrupted by the platinum Queen entering the room. "Cheers!" She was wearing a tight leopard suit and leopard tights. Around her neck was a dead animal from some galaxy far away, and her shoes were with leopard pattern. "That's my!..." Messy jumped and put a hand on her mouth. She struggled, but Messy gave her a Sulkan neck grip and she calmed down. He didn't grip her too hard, so she was still conscious, but drowsy. "What did you want to say?" "Oh, she wanted to say that's her favorite animal! She simply loves leopards. He drives us crazy with her talks about those furry things." The Queen made that jumping and hand waveing thing with the same routine as on the bridge. "What a coincidence! I ADORE leopards! Luckily I now have my closet full of them!" On that last line Ne went crazy again. Blood boiled in her and she was as red as a stuffed pepper. Messy gallantly sat down next to her, put one arm around her and pressed the other side of her neck. "Please, don't let the dinner cool down. Those Lethargian slime slugs are truly a delicacy." Said Messy casually, pointing at the plate in front of her. "Oh, don't mind if I do!" She said and then hopped on her highheeled leopard shoes to the couch next to the table. The couch screeched as she sat down, her tight clothes tightening up even more. Messy was trying his best not to look at her. She grabbed the plate and started devouring the snails. Obviously, her table manners didn't match her usual ones. "Now, about the revue you mentioned..." "Ah, yes" she replied to him "That thing". She wiped her hands off the beautiful leopard tights and continued. "We would like your crew to visit our ship where we are having it." "Messy nodded and then turned Ne's lymphatic head so it seemed like she looked at him. He has shown his ventriloquist skills and moved her like she usually did. The Queen never suspected she was under Messy's control. "I had consulted with my captain and she said she would be glad to come." He said and nodded Ne's head. "Just tell us when and where and we will come." The DP: When and where, and preferably the setting of the revue they are organizing. What does the platinum blonde say? <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Sorry, it's not a very funny chapter. I hope Masterweaver will think of something better. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Rune Citizen Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 285 Location: Get Lost. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:25 pm    Post subject: Your tenses switched back and forth so often it was as though they took it a step beyond bi-curious and went straight to confused. Events and actions seemed to happen quickly with no real supporting elements behind them, as though they were casually and hastily thrown in and the reader was to make the connection(sometimes that is fine but in this case it wasn't). The chapter felt incredibly rushed and managed to maintain my interest only because I wanted to see if it would get better or worse. I totally lost interest and awareness of the story as my mind immediately fixated on the glaring issues mentioned above and was unable to turn away. I'd highly suggest going back over the chapter and at least making it appear as though it wasn't rushed which could largely have to do with the constant tense changes. Sentences like: He ran to the door because he likes eating ice cream and thought there might be someone there delivering it because he had some friends who did that for him like they always do. Are absolute nono's and the story is riddled with at least partial examples of that. Did or do. Pick. There is no need to develop an entire crew or character history in a single SG length post. Focusing on a single aspect or two which can be worked on later and expanded in future chapters is better. You'll have more to say as you're focusing in on that trait or two and the reader will learn more about the character through the authors exploration of that aspect. As other authors take over, they'll have a better sense of the character(s) and what to do with them. At the moment there was no real character development, except perhaps the Pirate queen/king/it and Ne's rather superficial anger. I want to see your next post (assuming the guidelines above are followed). You've got ideas that definitely have merit but the execution was less than lacking. Good try but those issues need addressing. _________________ Just another statistic now. I'd always hoped you could be more. Haven't seen you in years. Now, only in my tears- Unseen and restless. People come and go. But hope, they'll never know- that I had for you and have still for those whom we held close. I'll see you in my thoughts and dreams. Try not worry for you- unseen. A child I knew you then- Now amongst the dead spirits of men. Live on little boy. My hopeless joy. I'll hang on if you linger. Rest your spirit with me. One friend down. Goodbye Christian. Last edited by Rune on Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:33 pm; edited 1 time in total Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:31 pm    Post subject: Thank you Rune. I know I am horrible with tenses, and this was a bit rushed because I had little time to post it. I will make sure it is edited and made into a readable chapter. I will fix it before the poll is put on, and I hope no-one reads it 'til then. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Masterweaver Honored Citizen Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Posts: 1463 Location: Look around Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 3:07 pm    Post subject: The dungeon, of course. Or the torture pit. Somehow, I feel it will expand out otherwise completly rediculous pirate captain's personality. Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 8:17 pm    Post subject: Leather and Latex Review. New Chappy! Messy and Captain Ne went to the mess hall where most of the crew were gathered eating dinner. Messy silently wished that they had warned the crew to eat light. He feared that the entertainment that they were about to be subjected may be too much for some to handle. He smiled inwardly as he pictured the mess the invading ship’s crew would have to clean. “Okay everyone, Captain on deck!” Messy shouted out to the crew. Everyone stood to attention. Messy worked his captain as he had in her chambers. “At ease people. Now, we have been invited to our, um, new friends ship for a little fashion show. I need about half of you here to volunteer for this little…adventure.” Everyone had sat back down, yet there were some that were standing to better see the drag captain in all her splendor. She stood outside in the hallway, visible through the glass doors of the cafeteria. Many people snickered or rapidly turned away. Very few stood, and of those, Messy saw that ten or eleven of them were the ships own trannies. Of course they wanted to come. Messy manipulated the semi conscious Ne further. “Well, I had hoped to not have to do this, but, well, Messy pick out the rest of the required crew.” Messy grinned as he cast his eyes about the room. How entertaining did he want to make his evening? He rapidly picked out eight members of the crew that were so prudish that Messy wanted to throttle them sometimes. He got so tired of hearing how some people were afraid that their masturbatory techniques were signs of a deeper psychosis, possibly making them unfit for duty. Let’s see how they handle this. Messy thought. Another twenty five of the crew were people that Messy just found generally annoying. He needed six more people, and these he figured should be those that were competent enough to assist him and their captain should this little distraction prove to harbor ill intentions. “Cy, Weaver, Tramp, Whitey, Crunchy and Rune, sorry guys and gals, but I need some people with brains and the ability to keep their lunches down with me. Can you all accompany us to ensure the safety of our Captain?” Everyone shouted out a brisk “Aye sir!”, Rune’s perhaps a little too excitedly, but still, in his eyes were the look of one who was willing to do what it took to protect his Captain, even if she were a woman. Messy nodded and gathered everyone around him. They stepped out of the mess hall and met Captain PMS. “All ready then?” the Drag Pirate said, her eyes lingering hungrily over Rune for a few seconds. Messy nodded an affirmative. “Beam us aboard Quentin .” A slight shimmering sensation passed through the crew, and then ceased as suddenly as it had begun. The crew took in their new surroundings. Chains and ropes hung from the ceilings and were attached to the walls, all with varying types of manacles and straps attached. Rune began to giggle at whatever fantasy was passing through his warped mind before he realized that the entire crew was looking at him. His giggles ceased, but the smile remained permanently fixed upon his face. There were chairs scattered about the place. Messy nodded to his trusted crew members, then jerked his head slightly in the direction of a clump of chairs that would seat all nine of them. They sat Captain Ne in the center, Messy on one side, Cy on the other. Everyone else took up the guard and seated themselves, adjusting their positions slightly so as to better see the entrances. A few more moments passed until all the crew were seated. Then out stepped the Drag Pirate, her body fully encased in tight black latex. Places that shouldn’t have bulged so much were obscenely obvious. The side view was even worse. She raised her hands for silence and then spoke in her most charming voice. “Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our annual leather and latex review. Thank you so much for agreeing to come and join us. Visitors to our show are so hard to get, for some reason. But enough talking, you don’t want to listen to me prattling on, so, let the show begin!” She sauntered off the stage and was quickly replaced by two more latex clad…women? Messy wasn’t one hundred percent sure if they were the real thing or not. He glanced at Rune. “Rune, your drooling. Wipe your chin!” Messy whispered. Rune didn’t even acknowledge him as the two women, one led by a stunning braided rubber leash, walked over to a heavy chain and cuff display. The cuffs rapidly snapped shut on the submissive’s wrists. “Now folks, I want you to observe the latest in whips and rubber play.” He reached down and grabbed up a ten foot kangaroo braid whip. He snapped it through the air, the sound a crisp snap in the air. The sub moaned. “Note how the rubber absorbs the impact, preventing any tearing or cutting of the flesh. This is very important to those that do not wish to scar their pets. He still feels the snap though, so punishment is still attainable even in this ensemble” He snapped out again, aiming at foot thick Styrofoam pillar. The end of the whip snapped through it, slicing it cleanly in half. He then returned his aim to the sub again, the crack louder, and the accompany yelp louder than before too. Cy seemed to be leaning forwards, impressed by the display. Messy personally wondered why you wouldn’t want the blood, but whatever . To each his own. More and more people were coming out, some clad scantily in tight leather corsets or bustiers, others in slick shiny vinyl that seemed so tight that they impeded the ability to move. Flogs and whips snapped and slapped, cat o’ nine tails and scourges left their stinging imprints on both flesh and soundwaves. Everyone was watching everywhere, mesmerized by the moaning and crying. Some of the crew seemed to be delving deep within their minds, picturing themselves wielding such power over other’s flesh and wills. Messy was pleased to see that some of them were aroused, and yet looking on as if at a funeral. One threw up. Messy was rather disappointed that more hadn’t succumbed to that, but perhaps that was for the best. No one was really paying attention anymore, the scene so mesmerizing that coherent thought was impossible for almost any of them. It was within this chaotic atmosphere, where thoughts and desires were riled up that it happened. So the crew is totally distracted. what happens next? _________________ Cause I am, whatever you say I am If I wasn't, then why would I say I am? I don't know, it's just the way I am. eminem without the threat of death, there is no reason to live at all marilyn manson Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 8:59 pm    Post subject: oh a blast rocks the ship... they are forced to travel on GR9... hilarity ensues though this whole Ne maniquin thing is wearing thin... _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 3:30 am    Post subject: Quote: though this whole Ne maniquin thing is wearing thin... Well Ne, it addsto the irony - when the ship is blasted and both crews transfer to GR9 Messy breaks the connection and you go rampage. But the thing is, you can't simply throw everyone out... remember the guy you were talking about? The "almost straight" one? As for the DP, let's leave Ne's suggestion for the next chapter. Now it would be nice that one of the diligent six sitting besides Ne's and Messy's side is secretly kidnapped and put as a submissive in the display. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:36 pm    Post subject: lol, and here i was thinking that it would be cool to see weapons pulled from who knows where and the pirates attempt to capture us and turn us into 'pets' giving rise to the need for escape and then destruction of the pirates after we get back on our ship. _________________ Cause I am, whatever you say I am If I wasn't, then why would I say I am? I don't know, it's just the way I am. eminem without the threat of death, there is no reason to live at all marilyn manson Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 1:54 pm    Post subject: Cyberworm wrote: Quote: though this whole Ne maniquin thing is wearing thin... Well Ne, it addsto the irony - when the ship is blasted and both crews transfer to GR9 Messy breaks the connection and you go rampage. How? _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:29 pm    Post subject: Well, since you cannot act your rage accumulates... And if it wasn't bad enough that your underwear got blasted, you have to be controlled... Imagine the reaction. We would all end up in the brig. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 7:11 pm    Post subject: Cyberworm wrote: Well, since you cannot act your rage accumulates... And if it wasn't bad enough that your underwear got blasted, you have to be controlled... Imagine the reaction. We would all end up in the brig. And you will! I am writing NEXT! MWHAHAHAHAAHAHAAAAAAA _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Rune Citizen Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 285 Location: Get Lost. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 1:59 pm    Post subject: *votes for Rune to throw up since that's more in character than the drooling over anything regarding the situation. Could chalk up the drooling to be self-imposed reverse psychology which ultimately went too far and failed. Otherwise, a somewhat education read. Wasn't sure I was ready to learn what I did. But learn I did, whether I wanted to or not! _________________ Just another statistic now. I'd always hoped you could be more. Haven't seen you in years. Now, only in my tears- Unseen and restless. People come and go. But hope, they'll never know- that I had for you and have still for those whom we held close. I'll see you in my thoughts and dreams. Try not worry for you- unseen. A child I knew you then- Now amongst the dead spirits of men. Live on little boy. My hopeless joy. I'll hang on if you linger. Rest your spirit with me. One friend down. Goodbye Christian. Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 2:04 pm    Post subject: If there aren't any more suggestions, we will put up a poll soon! _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 4:49 pm    Post subject: Rune wrote: *votes for Rune to throw up since that's more in character than the drooling over anything regarding the situation. Could chalk up the drooling to be self-imposed reverse psychology which ultimately went too far and failed. Otherwise, a somewhat education read. Wasn't sure I was ready to learn what I did. But learn I did, whether I wanted to or not! heya rune - thought we had lost you! good to see you back! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Head Eater Resident Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 62 Location: Hovering above your sssssskull Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:24 am    Post subject: Thisss experimental ssstorygame isss of a consssistently acceptable ssstandard. The directorsss mussst adhere to their rulesss to ensssure it remainsss ssso... _________________ Heads. Back to top Author The White Blacksmith Elder Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 2629 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:57 am    Post subject: F5 Rune. Seriously didn't want to see that. But see it I did, and I would prefer it not to go on for much longer. Perhaps one of the crew runs onto the stage and starts creating havoc? _________________ Tea Cures All. Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:34 pm    Post subject: sure thing - stay tuned for the next chapter... REMEMBER TO KEEP IT PG COMEDY... THINK STAR TREK... _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 4:53 am    Post subject: Boom boom The ship reverberated with a booming noise that echoed throughout, the music that had been blaring moments before was silenced , only to be replaced by the peircing screams of the Vixen’s emergency sirens. The ship started to lurch omminously and Ne’s eyes snapped back into focus with a quick movement of her head. Her entire demeanour took on that of ‘In-Charge Captain’ and she started to hussle out orders to her crew. ‘Rune – contact the GR9 and have them locate the source of the attack. Cy – help the Vixen’s crew to do whatever it is they need to do in order to keep her sky-worthy, Dr Crunch please ensure that there are no casualties amongst the, uh, display.’ Suddenly the reality of the stage show hit Ne and she clappeed a hand to her mouth, feeling the blood drain from her face, she had been so sure she was watching a musical... Penzance, she thought to herself. ‘Um, Messy... what the hell is this?’ Ne glanced at the silent figure beside her, he shrugged dismissivly a small smile playing across his face and laughter being held in was visible in his eyes. ‘Lord man, make yourself useful, go prepare the Leaper in case we need to get back to the Raven quickly.’ Messy bowed with an affected and mocking courtesy. ‘Your wish is my command, Captain...’ He straighened with a flourish and a cheeky look before turning to head towards the docking bays. Unconciously she raised a hand to her neck and gently massaged the tender place there – lately it had been so stiff and almost had a bruised feeling. Hearing hysterical screams in the distance she snapped back to herself. Her comms unit cackled to life as she strode towards the backstage area, from where she could hear the screams of the Queen. *squelch* ‘Cap’n. Its Rune... Second Comm’s has informed me that the attack has come from an unmarked ship in the Delta quadrant.. we have tried to hail her unsuccessfully – what do you want us to do Ma’am?’ Before she had a moment to respond her unit squawacked to life again. *schreech* ‘Captain, Cy here... Seems we have a very major hull breach and it is very unlikely that we will be able to repair her in time. We need to consider what would be the most effective solution, she is definitly going to disappate if she recieves even the smallest of taps on her ...’ *squeak* ‘Crunch here Nenners..’ Ne smiled to herself despite everything, having studied at the Academy together, hitting the party scene and later being assigned to the same crews – Crunchy seemed to have a problem remembering the correct protocols for communicating with the Captain. Still it had been a no-brainer when Ne had gotten her own ship as to who she wanted for her Medic. In fact the entire team had been hand chosen and the only unknown quantity was the new first mate Rune who was succeeding the loss of the previous Mate. *screlch* ‘Its a mess here, Ne. These people need proper medical treatment and the facilities on this ship resemble nothing so much as a third world chop shop for human body parts. If we don’t get some sort of weird infection from simply breathing the air in here, the injured will more than likely develop some type of fatal staph infection. I suggest we take them aboard Raven, her facilities are top of the line and can easily supprt the extra life forms.’ Ne hardly broke stride as she turned to look around the room. How on earth did they even get this hunk of junk skybound? Ne suddenly grew very scared, it was strange that she hadn’t noticed these deficencies on boarding the ship, ordinarily she would have assessed the entire operation the moment she first saw the docking bay doors. It was heavily ingrained in her, from all her years training, that noticing the details could mean the difference between survival and lack of. Tapping the Raven insignia on her suit she gave out terse commands. ‘Messy – please have the Leaper ready to go immediatly, we will need to make a couple of runs to the Raven. Crunchy gather up and use whoever you need to get the injured moved. Rune, please notify the Jane Doe of her rights, under the Neutrino Alliance’s charter - if they fail to reveal their id. codes as an Alliance Flagship we are within our rights to ‘shoot to kill’. Cy, i suggest you guys patch her up enough to buy us some movement time but please don’t dally as we are unsure of the Jane’s intentions, she may just fire again.’ Pushing through the curtains of the stage NeNe walked in to find the Queen sobbing hysterically over the remains of a very familiar pair of Blanik’s. ‘Just how much of my stuff did you manage to scoop up then?’ Her scathing tones cut through the hysterics and the Queen looked up with just enough grace to blush at being caught out. The Queen guiltily looked back over her shoulder and Ne followed the glance. There in the corner were piles of her own luggage! The ebony black raven emblazoned on them was unmistakably her own. ‘Why you sneaky little b...’ *squwack* ‘The ship is clear Ma’am. Fortunatly there was only a crew of 20 onboard the Vixen, frankly i am surprised she ever got clearance to hit space with a crew this small on a ship that size, and everyone bar Capt. Petunia is here in the Rec. Bay. The Jane Doe has failed to comply with orders, Ma’am. Cy is heading back with the Leaper to pick you up now.’ Sharp as a tack that one, NeNe thought to herself, perhaps the curse on her ability to find a First Mate had lifted. ‘Alright Petunia, lets haul ass back to the Raven. This heaps about to lose it at any moment.’ NeNe glanced around at the now empty ship, grabbing her current season Prada kit bag from the pile of her stuff she turned to head to the docking bay. Hitting the button that indicated to the computers that she was waiting for her transporter Ne noticed that the Queen hadn’t followed her to the hatch. ‘NeNe... I can’t do it. I just can’t leave her. She might not be much compared to the Raven but shes mine. I can’t just go out and replace her, i lack the funds for a start. Where else could someone like me fit in? This is my kingdom, my court... i would rather stay here and die with her than leave her to favce a puritan’s world.’ Petunia was absently stroking the wall and looking with soft eyes around the ship. Geez, this was Messy’s area not hers.. she was not a fuzzy warm touchy feely girl at the best of times... Petunia’s face grew very sad and Ne felt a very unexpected pang of sympathy – this was not normally her forte and she wondered why this moment was different to others. ‘Well perhaps you could give La Femme Bois a try, that cabaret bar? Over in Gamma? We could take you there – its not to far off course...’ Ne considered their options. She could understand the reluctance to part from the vessel, no one except another Captain could ever understand the bond formed with their ship. Hell, Raven wasn’t even yet upgraded to Sentinent and Ne loved it like her own child. ‘Maybe you could go to the scrap docks and buy a ship from there? Or.. well, the Raven is on track to a planet not currently under the Neutrino Alliances sway... we are hoping to negotiate a settlement with them... Maybe we could make use of your, uh, unique skills?’ Captain Petunia Macy Stiflers face lit up at the hint of hope. A world of possibility had just opened up to her and she was overwhelmed for choices. <well whats the Queen say?> _________________ ~ ~ Last edited by NeverNeverGirl on Sun Dec 23, 2007 5:21 am; edited 1 time in total Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 5:15 am    Post subject: A good chappy Ne, I luv it. I'd say she goes to the Neutrino planet and makes a fresh start. Maybe it will some day turn into a booming colony and then the GR9 crew will have a good ally there. Rock on gurl. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 5:29 am    Post subject: good job nene, i feel for you having to follow me, but, good job ending the show . hmm, drag queen helping in negotiations eh? where we headed, the planet of confused genders? anyways, i think that the drag queen would readily accept the invite to go to a new and 'unexplored' world. i say she accepts the offer to accompany us to the next planet. and messy will not be holding her throat and manipulating her, just to keep her in line. He would find it much more amusing to let her be herself _________________ Cause I am, whatever you say I am If I wasn't, then why would I say I am? I don't know, it's just the way I am. eminem without the threat of death, there is no reason to live at all marilyn manson Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:40 pm    Post subject: more opinions??? come on kids this one doenst suck and its easy reading. _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author The White Blacksmith Elder Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 2629 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 10:09 am    Post subject: Just kill 'er. It doesn't take that much willpower. _________________ Tea Cures All. Back to top Author Crunchyfrog Honorable IFian Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 3998 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:25 am    Post subject: Captain Nene Vergirl, of the Galaxy Raven 9 had her wardrobe supply ship stolen by the cross dressing Pirate Queen Captain Petunia Macy Stifler (PMS for short) of the Vixen. Nene and her crew were ordered to attend a S&M fashion show aboard PMS's ship. During the show the Vixen unexpectedly gets hit by enemy fire. The show breaks up, and with the help of her robotic crewman Cyberworm, roving dustbin Tramp in a S.T.O.R.M., rather colourfully dressed first officer Rune, becloaked vampire psychologist Messy, and the ships doctor Crunch, Nene evacuates the wounded crew of the Vixen back to GR9 using the shuttlecraft the 'Leaper'. Everyone is now safely aboard the GR9 apart from Nenners and Cap'n Petunia, who is reluctant to leave her disintegrating ship. Nene offers her a choice of destinations... Chapter... er, what chapter is it? Anyway, this one's called EVACUATE!!! As she considered her options, Captain Petunia "PMS" Stifler scratched her chin thoughtfully, her perfectly manicured nails creating tiny sparks as they dragged across the stubble on her jaw. "The planet is not under the Alliance, you say?" she asked quizzically. The ship shuddered and creaked. Nene shivered at the sudden drop in temperature. Life support systems were beginning to fail. *skchhreeak!* "Cap'n, the Leaper's docked, but I can't hold her in position long. The Vixen's breaking up!" Cy's mechanical voice crackled through Nene's communicator. Standing with hands on hips, feet apart and pelvis thrust yards in front of the rest of her, Nene looked down in disgust as Petunia snivelled and knelt on the floor, looking wistfully at the chains and manacles that were now swinging wildly about from the ceiling as the ship shuddered and rolled. "Move your sorry ass NOW if you want to save it, PMS!" she barked. "Ma'am!" squawked Cy through the communicator. "We don't have much time!" ~ ~ ~ Cy's head swiveled a full 180 degrees as his passengers, the two captains, entered the small cockpit of the Leaper, immediately losing contact with the ground and floating helplessly towards him. If he'd had lungs, Cy would have sighed. He extended a needle-like metallic protrusion from the area of his anatomy that might equate to a navel, and plugged it into a small oriface on the dashboard to engage the gravity. Various lights to start flashing, and he withdrew the needle quickly. Without warning Cy was suddenly thrust upwards through the air towards the ceiling, with which his metal body connected violently with a loud clang, and remained unmoving, secured by a strong electromagnetic field. "Damn, I gotta get the grav-field fixed on this thing!" he muttered, his limbs splayed helplessly across the lighting arrays. "Oh well. Engage!" On the voice command, the Leaper lived up to its name and leapt forward in stages like a learner driver with bad clutch control. The floating Nene Vergirl and Petunia Macy Stifler were flung aft, crashing against the rear door through which they had just entered. The grav field kicked in, but Cy remained magnetically bound to the ceiling as the shuttlecraft lurched forwards towards the Raven. “Communications channel open!” blurted Cy from his lofty position. The comms channel crackled to life, and the occupants of the Leaper were surprised to find themselves eavesdropping on a conversation between a group of Redshirts from the GR9 docking bay. “Yo! Incoming!” yelled the voice of a Redshirt through the intercom. “Any guesses which bay it’s aiming at?” “Uh, I’ll put 100 Neutrinian dollars on Port C,” crackled another. “150 says it’s Port B!” came a third voice. Nene got to her feet. Without warning she staggered across the cockpit and collided with another wall, as the Leaper shuddered again. She motioned at Captain PMS, who, after a moment’s realization, obliged by staggering across and hitting the wall beside her. “Hey it’s heading for F!” they heard another Redshirt exclaim. “Shit,” muttered Nene. The Leaper juddered again and the two Captains hurled themselves across the cockpit and collided with the wall on the opposite side, causing a bank of switches and flashing lights to fizzle dangerously in a puff of smoke. Holding her finger up for silence, Nene listened to the commentary on the intercom. “It’s veering back to Port B again! It’s docking in Port B! Help! Yeargghhh! I’m being crushed…” “Yesssss!” hissed Nene, punching the air in triumph. She always liked a little flutter on the docking procedure, and it wasn’t often she got the chance to influence it herself. Ah, that would be 1000 Neutrinian dollars Messy owed her when they got back, then. And if they crushed the right Redshirt during the process, her winnings would double. The Leaper powered down, and Cy fell unceremoniously from the ceiling to the floor. “Urgh, I feel like a lump of scrap metal,” he complained, pulling himself to an upright position. “Get this crate fixed,” snapped Ne over her shoulder to the android as she prepared to disembark. Cy muttered to himself as he opened the airlocks and the ramp descended to the docking bay floor, trapping yet another Redshirt underneath. Not even a word of thanks. Ms. Vergirl is beginning to take her crew a little too much for granted, he thought. “Bridge!” snapped Ne into her communicator as she strode through the docking bay. *crackle* “Welcome back, Cap’n.” Rune’s voice could be heard. "Status" ordered Nene. The ship shook as something impacted on its side. "Jane Doe firing again," reported Rune through the communicator. "Obviously," replied Nene. "We've gotta get out of here. Fight and run. We've got a mission to get our... uh, guests to safety." The communicator crackled again. “Request destination,” Rune's voice seemed unperturbed by the most recent attack. Ne glanced back at Petunia, who stumbled over the flattened expendable crew member. “Well?” she asked. “Where are we taking you?” “This planet you say the Raven is on track to… you say it’s NOT under the Alliance?” “That is correct,” replied Nene. “Oh yes,” said Petunia, adjusting her platinum blond wig. “I should soooo love to go there.” She leered seductively. Any planet not under the alliance was more likely to welcome her unusual culture. “That is just a perrrfect choice…” Raising an eyebrow, the captain of the GR9 tapped her communicator. “You hear that Rune?” *crackle* “Affirmative, Ma’am,” came the reply. “However, you need to get over to sick bay quick. Dr. Crunch – ‘wants a word in yer lug-hole,’ as she has so delicately put it.” Nene shook her head. Crunch was a good doctor, but her Spacefleet etiquette sucked. How she’d ever managed to get a job on a with Spacefleet with her persistent displays of insubordination Nene would never know. Still, the doctor was reliable and responsible for the health of the GR9 crew, and was now busy trying to tend to the 20 wounded crewmembers from the Vixen. She’d deserve a medal if she succeeded, if their bizarre physical appearances were anything to go by. “Dr. Crunch! Come in please!” snapped Nene. “Oi, Nenners, ‘bout time you got your ass back on the ship!" squeaked Crunch throught the communicator angrily. "What took you so long? Get yerself a facemask and get here quick… It’s serious doo-doo here.” “A facemask?" frowned Nene. "What are you talking about, Crunch?” “I’m talking fumes, Vergirlio. I mean, bad gas has got nuthin’ on this. This is serious stinking gut rot. I’m doin’ me best, but already two of me patients have exploded. And get this, Cap’n. The gut rot’s viral. And it’s airborne…” >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> DP - okay! so Captain PMS has elected to go to the planet to which GR9 is already headed. It's not under the Neutrino Alliance, so anything could happen there. Meanwhile, Dr. Crunch has discovered that the Vixen crew are all ill with gut rot and severe gas. This is catching, through the air, and can prove fatal. On top of that, the GR9 is being chased by an enemy that is taking pot shots at them. What does Nene decide to do? Continue on course to the potentially pervy planet in the hope of finding a cure? Quarantine the ship? Try to destroy the enemy ship? Something else? Answers on a postcard please and send first class to Galaxy Raven 9! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Last edited by Crunchyfrog on Mon Jan 28, 2008 4:48 am; edited 3 times in total Back to top Author Cyberworm Respected Citizen Joined: 19 Aug 2007 Posts: 652 Location: Spatially found, temporal lockdown. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:52 am    Post subject: OK, let's get this rolling again. I say they land of a planet full of... ahem... homosexuals of another kind. Lesbian planet. That would be very strange for our eh, male? guests. _________________ Slit and Slide One man's journey through the possibilities of solving what he says is a murder. What was it? Try not to forget. Beyond Good and Evil Could it be that being good is not good at all? Back to top Author The White Blacksmith Elder Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 2629 Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:46 am    Post subject: I think they should quarantine all those with the disease that Crunch thinks she might be able to save (if she can find the cure in time) and fire the others at the enemy ship. Two problems solved in one! _________________ Tea Cures All. Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 2:56 pm    Post subject: heres what we do! First we quarrantine sick bay, put anyone that was on the Vixen (excluding GR9 crew - who miraculously didnt eat or drink anything while there?) into an exclusion zone. No one goes in or out (Dr C and her medical staff are in there performing test and finding a cure.) While this is going on we engage the Jane Doe and work out why the hell they are shooting at us. They almost seem to look like another Alliance ship - are they rogue or have we been declared Rogue for some reason we have yet to figure out???? And that PMS woman... well she just refuses to be quarrantined and after being cleared of having the disease she loiters annoyingly on the Deck. _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author Mephistopheles Respected Citizen Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 612 Location: Not where I want to be. Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 3:22 am    Post subject: hmm, just let the pervs blow up, but move 'em closer to a garbage outlet so that the mess is easier to clean. otherwise, full speed ahead to the planet...er (goes to recall name)....oh, guess we never named the planet of acceptance for all. bummer. anyways, head there and try to lose the jane doe. and i believe that the other fleet ship is just having difficulties with their nice guy/bad guy finder, because someone wired the positive and negative wires backwards. they probably won't get it fixed before we head out though, so, some peoples is a gonna die! nice submission CF! I never realized that you had a slightly sadistic side! _________________ Cause I am, whatever you say I am If I wasn't, then why would I say I am? I don't know, it's just the way I am. eminem without the threat of death, there is no reason to live at all marilyn manson Back to top Author Serge Wolf Resident Joined: 23 Jan 2008 Posts: 39 Location: Texas Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:00 pm    Post subject: Alrighty. I read All of it This is a really really awesome story so far, smiles the entire way. It's been a really easy read and I can only wonder what exactly is going to happen to the rest of the crew. In fact, before I read this Messy said, that I seemed the type that I could fit into this sgame, so if you are all up for, I could join in as something, perhaps weapons engineer or something. Ok, Now for my opinion of what I think should happen. I think that they quarantine the entire ship, But PMS, Burst out into the most worse case and has to be put into isolation. All the while they get hailed from the mystery ship telling them to hand over PMS, or they will destroy the Raven in a manner most appropraite for PMs, Whatever that may be, But instead they lead into a super cool space race to the planet, whose special defense system takes out the mystery shooter, and thus all the problems are nicely solved in a manner appropraite, and the only cure for the ailling members of the Vixen? SHORE LEAVE! Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 4:16 pm    Post subject: Welcome aboard SERGE! YAYYYYYY You better identify yourself so we can let you aboard the vessel! Voting is now on! CLick it like you would a clicky thing! ~ Cyberworm is the next to write ~ Sign up now to board the GR9! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top Author NeverNeverGirl Honored Citizen Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 1216 Location: dreaming away of tomorrows to come Items Legends Fables Strata-gems Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:59 pm    Post subject: Hey there kids! The poll is closed and Crunchy Frog is writing next! (Yes CF thats You!) Engage the Jane Doe and Quarrantine the Vixen! Stay tuned! _________________ ~ ~ Back to top WHAT 2 DO! quarrantine the vixen and engage the Jane Doe ship...  75%  [ 3 ] quarrantine the Vixen crew and find a cure  0%  [ 0 ] quarrantine the vixen and head to planet Gaybos  0%  [ 0 ] eject them into space and go on our merry way  25%  [ 1 ] Total Votes : 4 : Display posts from previous: All Posts1 Day7 Days2 Weeks1 Month3 Months6 Months1 Year Oldest FirstNewest First         Storygames Home -> The Vault All times are GMT - 8 Hours Goto page 1, 2  Next Page 1 of 2 Jump to: Select a forum Info Street - FAQs and Guides to the City----------------IF Technical Institute and FAQIFquirerWriter's Academy City Central----------------City AuditoriumOpen ForumThe City!The Market BizarreHall of DebateAdvertisement BoardAuditorium ArchivesOpen Forum Archives The Fantasy Forest - Fantasy Storygames----------------Storygames: FantasyMature Fantasy StorygamesThe Children of LeyondIs this Me?The Funny Bone: Jokes and Humorous PicsTempora CrepusculiSparkleStepsFantasy Tales of IF Skiffiville - Science Fiction and Experimental SGs----------------Storygames: Scifi and ExperimentalMature Sci-Fi StorygamesHeavy MetalSymphony's RequiemSector 17Heavy Metal v2 Manor of the Macabre - Horror, Mystery, and Suspense----------------Storygames: Horror, Mystery and SuspenseMature Horror StorygamesThe Hidden Crime Reality Road - General Fiction SGs----------------Storygames - General FictionMature General Fiction Linear Lane - Linear stories, Critiques and writing competitions.----------------Linear DistrictMature Linear TalesLinear LibraryCritique Corner.Writers' ArenaShort Story Avenue Multiverse - CYOA-style Interactive Stories----------------How to create your CYOA Interactive StoryMultiverse Stories Role Player's Den----------------Role Playing Announcements and General InformationMature Role PlayingRole Play Rules and RequestsOne-On-One Role PlaysGroup Role PlaysFan Fiction Role PlaysOut of Character Discussion Threads Word Game Way----------------Fun with words! Artistic Avenue - Poetry and Member Art----------------Poetry PalaceMature PoetryArt GalleryMature Art Gallery Stasis Hall - Completed or archived Storygames----------------The Wheel - The White QueenElection Oct 10The Archer's QuestThe Magician's TouchThe Wheel - The Fish That WalkedRunThe Wheel - The RamThe Wheel - The Machine's DaughterThe Wheel - The Twin PrinceIndelibleTrade WindowsThe 2009 IFYsThe WeatherwardenGrim ReapingEterna FamiliaMayoral Election April 2011The HuntGalleons of the StarsRhapsody in BlueDoors to the TruthWrathBarry the NormalConversations With a Dead FriendBittersweet ReverieElection October 09InterFable Stories - A Vampire's Quest - COMPLETEInterFable Stories - Bushido - COMPLETEInterFable Stories - When Stories Travel TogetherMayoral Election May 2012Election Oct 2011ArenaThe Time BeforeBattle to the End - Start Here!Battle to the End - The Master of Illusion and LightElection March 09Battle to the End - SpellsingerBattle to the End - Yahoo: Mind over MagicElection March 2013A Fronte Praecipitium a Tergo LupiTruthseeker - COMPLETEPirates, Vampires, and Ninjas, Oh My!Virtual - COMPLETEFinite Cosmos - COMPLETESheerluck Holmes - COMPLETESojourner's Journey - COMPLETEAbduction!Beyond the Horn - COMPLETEShadows of the MindIFY Awards 2007Good vs Evil vs money!Heroes Never PanicNo Good Deed...Tired of Death - COMPLETEThe Greatest Fantasy Story EverPillboxDear Dotty.First against the WallScrapyard - On holdLords and LadiesFabled Island - COMPLETEConfession Box - COMPLETEUnderdark - COMPLETEA Glass Friendship - COMPLETEElection Oct 08ElvendorAvarice - COMPLETEVengeance - COMPLETEThe Dark - COMPLETEThe Endless WallTo Pass a TorchRise of ShadowsThe ArchivesThe IFY 2006 ArchiveElection Apr 08Election Oct 07Election Apr 07Election Oct 06Election Apr 06The Vault  You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum

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